Sea
The sea yet turbulent is beautiful2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adored the sentiment here but you seemed to have lost your way with the syllable count as it reached a whopping 17 syllables at the end! You might want to reduce the syllables so that your poem is not disqualified, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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I adored the sentiment here but you seemed to have lost your way with the syllable count as it reached a whopping 17 syllables at the end! You might want to reduce the syllables so that your poem is not disqualified, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Yes sometimes I get mixed up with syllables and words I work a steady full time job now I’m missing this. Don’t have much time here. I fixed it Dolly. I saw what I had did as soon as I posted. Thank you so much.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem captures the sea so beautifully! Waves crashing and leaving behind treasures like seaglass and sand dollars is terrific. It makes me feel like I'm walking along the shore. The way you share the sea's danger alongside its beauty is terrific. It's a wonderful tribute to the ocean's majesty. Keep writing, this is lovely!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Your poem captures the sea so beautifully! Waves crashing and leaving behind treasures like seaglass and sand dollars is terrific. It makes me feel like I'm walking along the shore. The way you share the sea's danger alongside its beauty is terrific. It's a wonderful tribute to the ocean's majesty. Keep writing, this is lovely!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much
