2025 Japanese Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Spanish Guitar".
7 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I really like how you transition from just playing the guitar to the emotional effect that music has, even personifying the guitar with its "waist" and the guitarists is moved in his heart by the music!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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I really like how you transition from just playing the guitar to the emotional effect that music has, even personifying the guitar with its "waist" and the guitarists is moved in his heart by the music!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Love,
Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
My father built my brother and I a Spanish guitar, one of them is still in my family. I can play a little, but never learned to play it as well as would have liked. I like your words of personification as the heartstrings of emotions are pulled. Beautifully illustrated and written.
RJ
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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My father built my brother and I a Spanish guitar, one of them is still in my family. I can play a little, but never learned to play it as well as would have liked. I like your words of personification as the heartstrings of emotions are pulled. Beautifully illustrated and written.
RJ
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Music can bring back the most wonderful memories of love and sensuality,
"emotions pull my heartstrings" beautiful last line, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Music can bring back the most wonderful memories of love and sensuality,
"emotions pull my heartstrings" beautiful last line, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This Gogyohka verse is filled with sensuality as the guitar personifies a Spanish dancer, capturing the fluent movements of the Flamenco. Well done and thank you. Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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This Gogyohka verse is filled with sensuality as the guitar personifies a Spanish dancer, capturing the fluent movements of the Flamenco. Well done and thank you. Debbie
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Guitar music is beautiful. Spanish guitar music is even more beautiful. Thank you for sharing this poem and this gorgeous presentation with us. I enjoyed both, greatly.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Guitar music is beautiful. Spanish guitar music is even more beautiful. Thank you for sharing this poem and this gorgeous presentation with us. I enjoyed both, greatly.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how you shared such intense feelings in your poem. Playing your Spanish guitar beneath shimmering stars sets such a dreamy scene. The line "its music has an aching sound" really pulls at the heart. I can feel the emotions coming through as you hold the guitar. It's like I'm right there with you, feeling each note. Great job!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I love how you shared such intense feelings in your poem. Playing your Spanish guitar beneath shimmering stars sets such a dreamy scene. The line "its music has an aching sound" really pulls at the heart. I can feel the emotions coming through as you hold the guitar. It's like I'm right there with you, feeling each note. Great job!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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My job is done. LoL Japanese poetry is to be visualized and deeply felt. I love this type of poems.
Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your honest and encouraging review.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
love these lines - especially the final 2!
"its music has an aching sound
while I hold it by the waist
emotions pull my heartstrings"
great imagery and smooth flow
good line connection and cool presentation
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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love these lines - especially the final 2!
"its music has an aching sound
while I hold it by the waist
emotions pull my heartstrings"
great imagery and smooth flow
good line connection and cool presentation
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
