Sound of music
Touching my inner soul5 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I think you got the wrong word count on lines three and four. Maybe you were counting syllables instead of words? Forgive me if I'm wrong. I just think you should double-check this. I did enjoy the poem! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I think you got the wrong word count on lines three and four. Maybe you were counting syllables instead of words? Forgive me if I'm wrong. I just think you should double-check this. I did enjoy the poem! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you yes I think I was mixed up also thinking about syllables . Thank you for pointing that out and for the review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really love the way your poem uses sound. The way you describe music as "setting souls on fire" is a beautiful. Your poem has such a warm energy. Great job - I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I really love the way your poem uses sound. The way you describe music as "setting souls on fire" is a beautiful. Your poem has such a warm energy. Great job - I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much
Comment from Harambe iz ur Daddy
** rating revised up after edits made by author **
Hi author,
Your third and fourth lines are currently the wrong length to meet the contest requirements:
Line 3 (to the sound of music): 5 words - should be 6
Line 4 (touching my inner soul): 4 words - should be 6
Usually these contests have syllable and not word requirements, so probably you were on autopilot and just counted the syllables in this lines (which happened to be six). Anyway, fix it and message me back, and I will add stars to this review.
Color schematic/presentation look good.
Best regards,
🦍
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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** rating revised up after edits made by author **
Hi author,
Your third and fourth lines are currently the wrong length to meet the contest requirements:
Line 3 (to the sound of music): 5 words - should be 6
Line 4 (touching my inner soul): 4 words - should be 6
Usually these contests have syllable and not word requirements, so probably you were on autopilot and just counted the syllables in this lines (which happened to be six). Anyway, fix it and message me back, and I will add stars to this review.
Color schematic/presentation look good.
Best regards,
🦍
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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This is my first attempt at this I was counting syllables got mixed up there. Thank you so much for pointing that out. I believe I have it corrected now.
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Looks good! I bumped up the rating.
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Thankyou so much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the wild emotion and happiness in your post when listening to music, I would suggest you made the word soul plural as follows:
setting (souls)
Love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I enjoyed the wild emotion and happiness in your post when listening to music, I would suggest you made the word soul plural as follows:
setting (souls)
Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thankyou Dolly will do.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem for the challenge. You use good imagery and descriptive word choices. Many readers will enjoy this theme. This is well written and displayed. Best wishes.
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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This is an excellent poem for the challenge. You use good imagery and descriptive word choices. Many readers will enjoy this theme. This is well written and displayed. Best wishes.
Alex
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much alex
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You're welcome!
