Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem for the challenge. You use good imagery and descriptive word choices. Many readers will also relate to this theme.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
Thank you so much, Alex. Your praise of my poem is much appreciated.
Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
Sounds great! Does this have to be the exclusive domain of teens? This is a fun and well-presented post with the verse compliant with the contest prompt. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
You are so right, Debbie. Spring Break was so looked forward to when I taught. Many thanks for your review.