Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your poem had me laughing! The clever wordplay make it so much fun to read. "Dutch Oven lovin'" is a great way to wrap it up. The idea of a grandkid unknowingly walking into the situation is just too funny. This one definitely brings the giggles - well done!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
Comment from
Claire Tennant
This is, without doubt, a great poem. I love the combination of expressive words regarding the natural and the advice. It matches the pattern beautifully. I thoroughly enjoyed it to the point of giggling. Good Luck.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025