Ark
*Looks like there*s a storm brewing*3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like this! It really makes me go back over your monorhyme to say the words out loud. Your trinet is fun and clever and is nicely complemented with a cartoon-style ark, perfect for children. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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I like this! It really makes me go back over your monorhyme to say the words out loud. Your trinet is fun and clever and is nicely complemented with a cartoon-style ark, perfect for children. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Debbie.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is such a fun take on the animals of Noah's Ark! I love the way each creature gets its moment to shine. The little "kung fu" panda made me smile! And that ending was perfect! I really enjoyed it!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Your poem is such a fun take on the animals of Noah's Ark! I love the way each creature gets its moment to shine. The little "kung fu" panda made me smile! And that ending was perfect! I really enjoyed it!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Thanks, Michael.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a very good poem for the contest. You use good imagery and emotion. I actually have a small icon of Noah's Ark over our front door inside our house. Your photo image presentation supports your words well.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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This is a very good poem for the contest. You use good imagery and emotion. I actually have a small icon of Noah's Ark over our front door inside our house. Your photo image presentation supports your words well.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Alex.
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You're welcome!
