She Brought the Sunshine
She Brought the Sunshine Into My Life.45 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Harry,
This is a strong love poem which uses repetition well to expand the love as it expanded in you. From the order in which it was written you got married because she was pregnant. The end being its just you and me seems to say the son died.
I hope I am misunderstanding it. If not, sorry for your loss.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your day.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Hi Harry,
This is a strong love poem which uses repetition well to expand the love as it expanded in you. From the order in which it was written you got married because she was pregnant. The end being its just you and me seems to say the son died.
I hope I am misunderstanding it. If not, sorry for your loss.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your day.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Oh no Joan. He just went off to college. So it is just me and her. Thank you so much for the great review and kind words. I truly appreciate that!
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Good to here. Now empty nesters until summer.
You're most welcome, Harry.
Joan
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Roger that. Thank you!
Comment from talented150
Your poem was wonderful, and I'm sure your wife loved it. You paid her a great honor by saying that she brought the sunshine into your life. What greater compliment can there be than to thank someone for making you so happy. A very wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Your poem was wonderful, and I'm sure your wife loved it. You paid her a great honor by saying that she brought the sunshine into your life. What greater compliment can there be than to thank someone for making you so happy. A very wonderful poem.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Well, thank you so much for the great review and the kind words. It is greatly appreciated!
Comment from ESOSTINE
This is awesome. I love the hear the voice of love and companionship singing in harmony. I am glad your love is so bright and soothing. Well done, dear. Thanks for sharing your world.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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This is awesome. I love the hear the voice of love and companionship singing in harmony. I am glad your love is so bright and soothing. Well done, dear. Thanks for sharing your world.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much ESOTINE for the great review and kind words. I truly appreciate you!
Comment from Elena Zhuravel
It's touching and resonates.
I like the warm feelings this poetry evokes,
but I can also feel the pain in every word.
Perhaps it's connected to my personal experiences.
It's amazing... how it can be a mirror.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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It's touching and resonates.
I like the warm feelings this poetry evokes,
but I can also feel the pain in every word.
Perhaps it's connected to my personal experiences.
It's amazing... how it can be a mirror.
Thank you.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much Elena for the great review and kind words. I truly appreciate that!
Comment from jacquelyn popp
The poem is so romantic, and it truly feels like it's based on your own genuine experience. I love the way that you used the sunshine as a metaphor for love everlasting, such a beautiful and vivid image. The line about her bringing sunshine into your life is a compliment to your wife, and reflects the deep admiration and affection you feel for her.
It's a lovely tribute to her, and I can almost feel the warmth of your love shining through every word. Together, you will surely bask in the sunshine forever. Your poem is beautifully written, and I'm especially impressed by the nice rhyme scheme that you have crafted. The imagery is incredibly effective, and the comparison between live and nature speaks volumes. The photo you chose complements your words perfectly, enhancing the whole experience of your poem.
Nicely done! I also appreciate your very good opening verse, it sets the tone so well for the rest of your piece. The theme of sunshine is so lovely and I like how it relates to your relationship. Your comparison of love growing up"like a sprouting tree" is another beautiful touch. This is a wonderful poem with effect imagery, a solid rhyme scheme, and heartfelt presentation. Very well done!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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The poem is so romantic, and it truly feels like it's based on your own genuine experience. I love the way that you used the sunshine as a metaphor for love everlasting, such a beautiful and vivid image. The line about her bringing sunshine into your life is a compliment to your wife, and reflects the deep admiration and affection you feel for her.
It's a lovely tribute to her, and I can almost feel the warmth of your love shining through every word. Together, you will surely bask in the sunshine forever. Your poem is beautifully written, and I'm especially impressed by the nice rhyme scheme that you have crafted. The imagery is incredibly effective, and the comparison between live and nature speaks volumes. The photo you chose complements your words perfectly, enhancing the whole experience of your poem.
Nicely done! I also appreciate your very good opening verse, it sets the tone so well for the rest of your piece. The theme of sunshine is so lovely and I like how it relates to your relationship. Your comparison of love growing up"like a sprouting tree" is another beautiful touch. This is a wonderful poem with effect imagery, a solid rhyme scheme, and heartfelt presentation. Very well done!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Well, thank you so much Jacquelyn. I truly appreciate the kind words and great review!
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very romantic poem. Any woman would be thrilled to know she had brought sunshine into the life of the person she cares about. I enjoyed reading your nicely written poem.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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This is a very romantic poem. Any woman would be thrilled to know she had brought sunshine into the life of the person she cares about. I enjoyed reading your nicely written poem.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Well, thank you so much Beth. I truly appreciate the kind words and great review!
Comment from Dawn Munro
I am not quite sure if the beloved the author writes about is the two left at the end of this sweet poem, I only know that it evokes a sense of melancholy in me... Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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I am not quite sure if the beloved the author writes about is the two left at the end of this sweet poem, I only know that it evokes a sense of melancholy in me... Well done.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Well, thank you so much Dawn. I truly appreciate the kind words and great review!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Boogienights
This is so romantic, based on your true experience? I love the way you used the sunshine as an example of love everlasting. Thanks for sharing, l loved this. :)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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This is so romantic, based on your true experience? I love the way you used the sunshine as an example of love everlasting. Thanks for sharing, l loved this. :)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Well, thank you so much! I truly appreciate the kind words and great review!
Comment from teafor2
Harry, this is the kind of hyperbole that spills from the mind, heart and
pen of a wordsmith in love...title, picture, theme and tone capture's all the heartfelt sentiments combined in the marriage of your poignant stanzas. teafor2
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Harry, this is the kind of hyperbole that spills from the mind, heart and
pen of a wordsmith in love...title, picture, theme and tone capture's all the heartfelt sentiments combined in the marriage of your poignant stanzas. teafor2
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Well, thank you so much for the great review and kind words. I truly appreciate you!
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you are welcome. teafor2
Comment from Sanku
To say that she brought sunshine into your life is the most wonderful compliment you can give yourwife. This is a lovely tribute to her ..And together you will bask in that sunshine...
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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To say that she brought sunshine into your life is the most wonderful compliment you can give yourwife. This is a lovely tribute to her ..And together you will bask in that sunshine...
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thank you Sanku for the kind words, great review and you! I truly appreciate that!
