At Last!
To a much needed bowel movement3 total reviews
Comment from Rhonda Hiser
We have all been there whether some would admit it or not, that is their problem! Lol. Enjoyed the imaginative build-up to the end, and I'm glad you finally got to the bottom of things! Look forward to future works. Thanks for the laugh!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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We have all been there whether some would admit it or not, that is their problem! Lol. Enjoyed the imaginative build-up to the end, and I'm glad you finally got to the bottom of things! Look forward to future works. Thanks for the laugh!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Cheers, Rhonda. Glad it made you smile.
Comment from ESOSTINE
Well done for sharing your thoughts which was beautifully presented with a bit of humour. It got me laughing yet empathic considering the painful experience. Can you please consider changing the font colour to a brighter one as the current colour makes the poem difficult to read. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Well done for sharing your thoughts which was beautifully presented with a bit of humour. It got me laughing yet empathic considering the painful experience. Can you please consider changing the font colour to a brighter one as the current colour makes the poem difficult to read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Many thanks.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A simple bodily function here that when absent can cause us to be very ill! I think we all can identify with this poem if we allow ourselves to admit it. A clever post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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A simple bodily function here that when absent can cause us to be very ill! I think we all can identify with this poem if we allow ourselves to admit it. A clever post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Thanks, Dolly.
