Days end
Beautiful sunset5 total reviews
Comment from Lana Marie
Very nicely done with all the rhymes ending with the same sound. I was trying to decide whether to enter this or not, but I didn't know how many lines it needed to be. Good job. I like your presentation as well.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Very nicely done with all the rhymes ending with the same sound. I was trying to decide whether to enter this or not, but I didn't know how many lines it needed to be. Good job. I like your presentation as well.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
That setting sun scene certainly does entice you to enjoy the last rays before dark. I like the change of tone from reflective to motivational in the last line, concluding your mini story in well selected monorhyme. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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That setting sun scene certainly does entice you to enjoy the last rays before dark. I like the change of tone from reflective to motivational in the last line, concluding your mini story in well selected monorhyme. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much
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Thank you so much
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem has such cheerful energy! The poem flows so smoothly. I love how it shares the simple joy of a day well spent. That last line adds a nice twist. Such a delightful read!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Your poem has such cheerful energy! The poem flows so smoothly. I love how it shares the simple joy of a day well spent. That last line adds a nice twist. Such a delightful read!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from BermyBye50
This is a short but sweet monorhyme poem honoring the natural beauty of the day's end at Sunset. Your rhyming was spot on and the imagery in both the words and artwork easily conveyed the emotion of your cleverly written short write.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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This is a short but sweet monorhyme poem honoring the natural beauty of the day's end at Sunset. Your rhyming was spot on and the imagery in both the words and artwork easily conveyed the emotion of your cleverly written short write.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much Eugene 🙂
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Some days are so good that we want them to last forever! I have had many days in my memory that I treasure and would love to live them over again, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Some days are so good that we want them to last forever! I have had many days in my memory that I treasure and would love to live them over again, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thanks Dolly first attempt at this I don’t even know if it’s correct or not. 🙂
