Comment from hari anand

Excellent

I am enjoying your poetry in a row, this is third today, I must say you have a distict style and your poems have positive approach and hope, excellent

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for excellent review

Comment from amahra

Good

I'm not sure what all that you've said have to do with ethics. Maybe a nice image of some kind would help me to see the point.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

Not sure about the style or structure but it is well written and well delivered. Your messages are powerful and I enjoy your poems. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for commendable review

Comment from FLutterodt

Good

The sun enjoys right kiss.
Shaded moon peeps, pries your miss or kicks.
Birds, trees, hills, sky, good hearts pat you strike.
Let them sing, grab this time or drum fate.

Very interesting poem. Good form, good content, challenging subject

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks

Comment from Neelam Sangwai

Excellent

Very good content. Its optimistic, passionate, and sort of WINNING. Believing in liveliness is the life itself. A Good kick for the breaking- day. Thank you for sharing - Neelam

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Sorry, I didn't understand the meaning of this one.
Maybe some authors notes would give some insight into your thoughts. Interesting word choices throughout.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for trying and writing feedback

Comment from Curt Mongold

Average

I have no idea what this is supposed to mean at all. Did you translate this from another language? If so,it didn't wash well in the mix. I simply cannot make heads or tails what the meaning could even be, and I usually guess fairly well.
Perhaps some explanation of your "style" would alleviate the puzzlement my friend.
Curt

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

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Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

I think this poem is talking about the demands of time and that God is watching as we live our daily lives. Would you mind explaining "fruits may late"? I suyppose I seem dense, but I'd like to know.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for quest review

Comment from G.B. Smith

Good

Again, another thought provoking poem, but again, I have to read it a several times to see if it will make sense to me. I have to say that it feels choppy. I was disappointed that you did not have anything in your author's notes to help the reader
Bear

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks

Comment from trailblazer101

Excellent

It's good although this seems a little more disjointed than other works of yours.

But I really liked the last part:

Shaded moon peeps, pries your miss or kicks.
Birds, trees, hills, sky, good hearts pat you strike.
Let them sing, grab this time or drum fate.

That caught my eye for certain sure.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review