Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I have no idea what your poem means as it is completely lost on me but I do think you have good intentions and only you know the meaning of these words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2021

Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

You use a lot of strong imagery in your postings and this writing is no exception. I have noticed that you do not respond to reviews, and I am wondering why. You are a prolific writer so maybe it is the time factor.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Again an interesting poem, but one that is a little hard to understand. I take it to mean that life can take twists and turns and you have to deal with it...am I right about this. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Startling, jarring, imagery, rife with unexpected phrasings and odd juxtapositions of words. Alas, I am not able to construe their meaning nor comprehend overall metaphor.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Now that's an interesting writing challenge. Relating life events in many different forms. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Excellent

can you please tell me what this stanza means. I'm at a loss

The Unseen Eye eyes you.
Silver, whitish lining woo if failed.
Keep time, kick dark; bring light.
Air plays flute, helps finding your foes.

Take care Pete

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Good

I tried making some sense of it . It flew above my head. I give up. If you clarify the hidden lessons in this poem, I might re-read it and reevaluate it. Please excuse me for this abrupt ending.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2021

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

A very well written piece my friend through I struggled to get the meaning of it well written and presented thank you gazzagodbod

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from jmdg1954

Good

So far you're oh for three in the poems I've read. It appears like a string of words seemingly meaningless unless versed in your language. I just don't get it. Without any responses from you on any reviewers reviews, seems like you could care less. Pompous? I guess!!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from candi lester

Excellent

I truly like your writtings.......
they always are written so well.....
and the topics are always good........
thanks for sharing with us........
SWEETNESS FOREVER

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013