Hang On!
Poem 5/7/53 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I can virtually feel that storm from the image and, as long as he doesn't lose his hat I'm happy:) Love the fluency and message of your well-crafted and presented 5-7-5 verse. A great job and strong contender Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2025
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I can virtually feel that storm from the image and, as long as he doesn't lose his hat I'm happy:) Love the fluency and message of your well-crafted and presented 5-7-5 verse. A great job and strong contender Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2025
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Superb review zanya
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so short - but also so powerful! I really enjoyed your poem. For me it's a reminder that no matter how hard things get - hope gives us a place to wait for better days. Such a comforting message!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Your poem is so short - but also so powerful! I really enjoyed your poem. For me it's a reminder that no matter how hard things get - hope gives us a place to wait for better days. Such a comforting message!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Great review zanya
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
it's very hard to write a complete poem in so few syllables. I liked the imagery. IT was a great way to express hope when life has you down. I enjoyed this poem.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2025
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it's very hard to write a complete poem in so few syllables. I liked the imagery. IT was a great way to express hope when life has you down. I enjoyed this poem.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2025
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Thanks for reviewing zanya