Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Eye-catchingly dramatic, your post strikes the perfect chord with its delightful sentiment of togetherness in fluent 3-5-3 verse. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025

Thanks so much, I'm always glad to hear from you. :)

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

So well done. I love how just a few words can carry such a powerful message. "Weather it all" makes me think of facing storms side by side - no matter what comes. And ending on "Together" gives it such a hopeful
feel. Great job!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025

Thank you for this very nice review, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I liked the bit of rhyme you slipped in there. The poem was sweet, and it looks like you got the syllable counts right for the writing prompt. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025

Thank you, I really appreciate it. :)