Exception
The one receiving must be trustworthy.2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-Your note is appreciated, and I agree with you.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-A good subject begins the poem
followed by how it is deserved,
but there is an exception.
-You make a very good point at the end.
-Good luck in the contest. A good entry.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-Your note is appreciated, and I agree with you.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-A good subject begins the poem
followed by how it is deserved,
but there is an exception.
-You make a very good point at the end.
-Good luck in the contest. A good entry.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the read and feedback. Appreciated.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is short but really powerful! The last line is perfect - it makes me stop and think about when loyalty is truly earned. Nicely done! I thought this was great - you say so much with so few words.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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Your poem is short but really powerful! The last line is perfect - it makes me stop and think about when loyalty is truly earned. Nicely done! I thought this was great - you say so much with so few words.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the read and feedback. Appreciated.
