Magical cenote
Magical cenote7 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
You did a good job setting the scene using just the image and dialogue to express this. You made me curious, and I had to look up "cenote." Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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You did a good job setting the scene using just the image and dialogue to express this. You made me curious, and I had to look up "cenote." Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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If you go to Mexico give it a try.
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
This is great. I wish you luck in the contest. My strong suit is dialogue but I think it would be hard to write all dialogue to tell a story. How nice that these two people met at random and were able to share the adventure together.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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This is great. I wish you luck in the contest. My strong suit is dialogue but I think it would be hard to write all dialogue to tell a story. How nice that these two people met at random and were able to share the adventure together.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Hi Kristen thank you so much for the good wishes and the review.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is very creative, interesting, and well written! I love the detailed descriptions within the dialogue. This was fun to read. Best wishes with this great contest entry!!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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This is very creative, interesting, and well written! I love the detailed descriptions within the dialogue. This was fun to read. Best wishes with this great contest entry!!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much, Alex
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You're welcome, Iza!
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's amazing that collapsed limestone creates such beautiful watering holes in so many shapes and sizes, some opening up into long rambling cave systems that travel for miles and where marine animals thrive. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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It's amazing that collapsed limestone creates such beautiful watering holes in so many shapes and sizes, some opening up into long rambling cave systems that travel for miles and where marine animals thrive. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much for your review, and yes they are magical
Comment from estory
All through magical dialogue you capture this sense that a place, a mysterious place, can bring two people together where they discover they have so many shared interests and chemistry. It is fun to watch the two personalities here blend together into a harmony. estory
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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All through magical dialogue you capture this sense that a place, a mysterious place, can bring two people together where they discover they have so many shared interests and chemistry. It is fun to watch the two personalities here blend together into a harmony. estory
Comment Written 20-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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We all wish for such a magical connection blessed by the holy nature:)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love the sense of adventure in your story! The way Alex and Maria connect makes their conversation feel so natural. Their enthusiasm is contagious. It made me want to dive right in with them! Great job bringing that magic to life. Keep writing - this is fantastic!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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I love the sense of adventure in your story! The way Alex and Maria connect makes their conversation feel so natural. Their enthusiasm is contagious. It made me want to dive right in with them! Great job bringing that magic to life. Keep writing - this is fantastic!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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You and me together:) if there is water... I jump:)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I had never heard of cenotes before. I did a little research along with what you shared with us. I've learned interesting things about them. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I had never heard of cenotes before. I did a little research along with what you shared with us. I've learned interesting things about them. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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They are quite famous in this part of the world, it's like I never saw a fiord, but for you is something normal;)
