Reviews from

Hell Fire Club - Scream!

covert sexual playgrounds for the rich and powerful

3 total reviews 
Comment from Harambe iz ur Daddy
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I was trying to get a 2-D into this contest, but couldn't finish in time so I'm glad you did. This is outstanding work, showingcasing a formidable vocabulary with no malapropisms to paint a sordid scene. I hope this wins and it will definitely have my vote in the contest. I will also add it under the listing of 2D acrostics showcased under the next contest listing.

Clearly you put a lot of work into this and it paid off.

🦍

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
    So very generous. Much appreciated.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
    So very generous. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I suppose all night time activities in these drinking places serving alcohol and sexual playgrounds were women are often vulnerable and predators are on the prowl. When young women have too much to drink, they leave themselves open to abuse by men who want sex. A fine acrostic revealing the truth about nightclubs and meeting places were alcohol dulls the senses, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
    Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from Rick Gardner
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

My words to live in, get ready
An acrostic for you today. She gave you every thing.
Now is the time, you are mine now, give it to me now.

Sexual gratification given and taken,
Extreme pleasure is now,
X, a letter of the lost now,
Under the covers, what I love to lick,
Anytime, all the time she says do it now.
Love is mine to give, this is how I give it.

Gift given as you wish,
Rock and roll as you wish,
Again as often as you want, what you need,
Take me now, suck me as you can and with joy,
Inside me deeply as you can give, go baby, go baby,
Fuck me now stupid girl, take it now,
I am ready, now is the time to give it up,
Can't stop now or ever,
Again and again, today and tomorrow.
Time is now, scream as you wish, your clit says yes again,
Inward you deeply give me the true depths of your body,
On and on, give it to me again,
Never stop, I am yours to fuck, I will fuck you now, again.



 Comment Written 19-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
    Thanks for the super rating, Rick. I think yours is terrific. Cheers.