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Couple of Strangers

Two strangers hand in hand.

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Comment from evilynne
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That's an interesting dialogue and a fitting caption for the picture. If only all were that easy! Falling love is usually quite a complicated affair. Best of luck in the contest! Evi

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
    Thank you! I hope I win first place!
Comment from nomi338
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Sounds nice, but I fear in this world that scenario will never fly. What if that stranger trying to hold your hand is a serial rapist or killer? What if he is a kidnapper or a robber? In today's world, most women would never allow some random man they ddo not know just walk up and hold their hand.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
    Thank you!
Comment from jim vecchio
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This was a cute entry. But Dudley and Sabrinaq should have gotten to spend a little time together before declaring love. When love is pronounced too quickly, it really is lust, not love.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
    Thank you! It's decent humor dialogue.
Comment from Teri7
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Raul, You did a really good job writing for this contest. You used great descriptive words that sounds like it could be a boyfriend and girlfriend to be. Great dialogue. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
    Thank you! I hope I win!
reply by Teri7 on 19-Mar-2025
    I hope you do too. When do we vote on it?