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10 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Gypsy you are one of the most romantic writers on here. There is nothing vulgar or unsavory. Just beautiful, romantic love. Very enjoyable. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
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Gypsy you are one of the most romantic writers on here. There is nothing vulgar or unsavory. Just beautiful, romantic love. Very enjoyable. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 MariLyn. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Harry Craft
Oooohh La la...This was a great poem about such a real subject. I enjoyed the rhyming of this lovely poem! The photo goes great with the poem as well. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Oooohh La la...This was a great poem about such a real subject. I enjoyed the rhyming of this lovely poem! The photo goes great with the poem as well. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You are so welcome!
Comment from kahpot
Naked Honesty, I really like the way you described the visual at the start and then, "your womb yearns life" the inner need and honesty, and understanding, so very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Naked Honesty, I really like the way you described the visual at the start and then, "your womb yearns life" the inner need and honesty, and understanding, so very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
I'm grateful for your exceptional six stars review and kind words 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh this was such a cool poem
so romantic and loving
with smooth flow and line connection
excellent imagery throughout
and love the refrain
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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ooh this was such a cool poem
so romantic and loving
with smooth flow and line connection
excellent imagery throughout
and love the refrain
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.... im happy you like it. 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I feel there's a metaphor here for the nakedness being that in true love one sees beyond the front most people put up and see the true person underneath and loves that person. Maybe I'm reading in too much, but, again, this is one of your best poems.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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I feel there's a metaphor here for the nakedness being that in true love one sees beyond the front most people put up and see the true person underneath and loves that person. Maybe I'm reading in too much, but, again, this is one of your best poems.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Yes!
Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Such intensive emotion here as you strip back the beauty of love to expose nature at its most fragile and vulnerable. A poem well suited to the Romantic era. Well done! Thank you for sharing, MariVal. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Such intensive emotion here as you strip back the beauty of love to expose nature at its most fragile and vulnerable. A poem well suited to the Romantic era. Well done! Thank you for sharing, MariVal. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is stunning! I love how each stanza shares a different picture of longing. I like how you compare nakedness to nature's barrenness - so creative. Your words flow like poetry should - so effortlessly! I really enjoyed reading this! Keep writing, your talent shines!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Your poem is stunning! I love how each stanza shares a different picture of longing. I like how you compare nakedness to nature's barrenness - so creative. Your words flow like poetry should - so effortlessly! I really enjoyed reading this! Keep writing, your talent shines!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Interesting perception of a man's point of view. I cannot speak to all men's perception, but I think that you covered some aspects well. I believe that most men might tend to be a bit more specific when they express such aspects of a woman's nakedness.
RJ
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Interesting perception of a man's point of view. I cannot speak to all men's perception, but I think that you covered some aspects well. I believe that most men might tend to be a bit more specific when they express such aspects of a woman's nakedness.
RJ
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy------and I suppose your description is the polite way of saying, super-hot, erotic, and just plain cool! But, since were both mature....err..still go with cool!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Another fine poem, Gypsy------and I suppose your description is the polite way of saying, super-hot, erotic, and just plain cool! But, since were both mature....err..still go with cool!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 😄
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Loved the poetry in this, MariVal! My favorite lines were:
"to see you naked is ...shorelines without reeds" - I like all the stanzas, actually. It's bittersweet and yet, that is what love is - the willingness to be honest and open seeing both the beauty and the heartache.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Loved the poetry in this, MariVal! My favorite lines were:
"to see you naked is ...shorelines without reeds" - I like all the stanzas, actually. It's bittersweet and yet, that is what love is - the willingness to be honest and open seeing both the beauty and the heartache.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much, Big Sister. You always understand my poems and the way I feel.
Love
Marival
