Thoughts of a Man
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Comment from Robert Funston
Hey Michael. You have a unique style of writing. You pulled me in a direction and I thought I understood where you were going with it and I was wrong. One a poem like this, it leaves room for the read to put their thoughts in to it and maybe travel in a direction they never thought of. Nicely done. Jake
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Hey Michael. You have a unique style of writing. You pulled me in a direction and I thought I understood where you were going with it and I was wrong. One a poem like this, it leaves room for the read to put their thoughts in to it and maybe travel in a direction they never thought of. Nicely done. Jake
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Thank you and Godbless
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is shares such a wonderful sense of possibility! I love how you play with choices and freedom. The ending is especially powerful! I read it as embracing yourself as the best version of you. I think that is such a strong message. It left me feeling inspired!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Your poem is shares such a wonderful sense of possibility! I love how you play with choices and freedom. The ending is especially powerful! I read it as embracing yourself as the best version of you. I think that is such a strong message. It left me feeling inspired!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Thank you that was a powerful reply much appreciated inspiration is something everyone needs at certain times I use different tactics every day
Comment from jim vecchio
This is a good motivational poem, especially for younger generations. God grants us all unlimited opportunities if we follow the right path. No one should ever limit their dreams.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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This is a good motivational poem, especially for younger generations. God grants us all unlimited opportunities if we follow the right path. No one should ever limit their dreams.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Well said thank you become limitless and strive
