A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from Sankey
I am really enjoying this. I come from a background similar to Rebekah's religious restrictions for men and women. Just one small miss I think."I'm waiting for you to return (to?) the couch."
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I am really enjoying this. I come from a background similar to Rebekah's religious restrictions for men and women. Just one small miss I think."I'm waiting for you to return (to?) the couch."
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
Comment from forestport12
The plot makes it interesting, as the pair who are strangers at first find themselves under the same roof. Bridge out, power out. That's when you can deepen the emotion and learn about each one, as they learn about each other. I like the way you present her, having been raised to be a saved Christian, but under a roof where legalism chokes the liberty in Christ. I may have read too much into it, but that's me. You have me along for the reading ride. Blessings...
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The plot makes it interesting, as the pair who are strangers at first find themselves under the same roof. Bridge out, power out. That's when you can deepen the emotion and learn about each one, as they learn about each other. I like the way you present her, having been raised to be a saved Christian, but under a roof where legalism chokes the liberty in Christ. I may have read too much into it, but that's me. You have me along for the reading ride. Blessings...
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I enjoyed reading this chapter. It's very romantic, as usual. I would love to have Tyler as my doctor.... he is so attractive... lol
Well done!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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I enjoyed reading this chapter. It's very romantic, as usual. I would love to have Tyler as my doctor.... he is so attractive... lol
Well done!
Gypsy
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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I think we all would. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love this new book of yours, it has all charms and romance in the right places, how I wish this will be true in real life. I guess I am still longing for that:) in the meantime I am just stuffing myself with your pretty dreamy romance.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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I love this new book of yours, it has all charms and romance in the right places, how I wish this will be true in real life. I guess I am still longing for that:) in the meantime I am just stuffing myself with your pretty dreamy romance.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Thank you for this kind review. True romance is difficult to find. I feel most of the time we find it when we're least expecting it.
Comment from Sanku
I hope that Tyler would be successful in recovering every trace of guilt from Rebekas mind .He is determined to face her father too . Rebecca will take some time to melt off her reservations..
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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I hope that Tyler would be successful in recovering every trace of guilt from Rebekas mind .He is determined to face her father too . Rebecca will take some time to melt off her reservations..
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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It does take Rebeka time to recover and to trust Tyler. None of this will come easy. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This was one of your best pieces, Barb. The story flows very nicely, and you are developing things very well. You have picked a good spot for a chapter break.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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This was one of your best pieces, Barb. The story flows very nicely, and you are developing things very well. You have picked a good spot for a chapter break.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from judiverse
Tyler seems almost too good to be true. He is taking good care of Rebeka, but I believe that's the way he'd treat anyone. Oh, dear, if he has to leave, Rebeka will probably have some kind of emergency. I'm curious to see how she'll handle the situation with her father. He outdoes the Amish in his beliefs. I hope she won't let him continue to force his beliefs on her. Look at Tyler's statement "I'm waiting for you to return the couch." I think something's missing. Seems like it's taking a long time to get that bridge repaired. Great job with this chapter! judi
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Tyler seems almost too good to be true. He is taking good care of Rebeka, but I believe that's the way he'd treat anyone. Oh, dear, if he has to leave, Rebeka will probably have some kind of emergency. I'm curious to see how she'll handle the situation with her father. He outdoes the Amish in his beliefs. I hope she won't let him continue to force his beliefs on her. Look at Tyler's statement "I'm waiting for you to return the couch." I think something's missing. Seems like it's taking a long time to get that bridge repaired. Great job with this chapter! judi
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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So far, the bridge repair has only been 2 days and it's a weekend. Thank you for the kind review. Rebeka's father is an interesting character. We will discover more as the story continues.
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I can't remember whether you had mentioned Rebeka's mother. I am assuming she's dead. You are right--those repairs do take time. My brother lives in Georgia and just got his roof repaired after it had been damaged in a storm several months ago. judi
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Rebeka's mother will enter the story shortly. She will bring another dimension to Rebeka.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Tyler is so attentive towards Rebekah and has seen that she's off to hospital now for a few days to ensure that all is ok. We know so much about Rebekah from your chapter here but still need her character to be fleshed out more, possibly when Tyler speaks to her father. Thank you for sharing your excellent read, Barbara. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Tyler is so attentive towards Rebekah and has seen that she's off to hospital now for a few days to ensure that all is ok. We know so much about Rebekah from your chapter here but still need her character to be fleshed out more, possibly when Tyler speaks to her father. Thank you for sharing your excellent read, Barbara. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Rebeka is remaining on the ranch and Aunt Beth will come to stay with her. Tyler is off to the hospital because of a 19 car accident. More about will continue to be reviewed. Thank you for the kind revie.
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Sorry to get my facts mixed up, Barbara. I kept re-reading but still got the wrong end of the stick:(
Comment from lyenochka
Well, if we're ever traveling Texas, I sure hope that someone like Dr. Tyler Butler would have an BnB for rent! He is the nicest human being and it's good that Rebeka had stumbled into his area. Getting close to Zeke is definitely a first step for Rebeka and Tyler's relationship!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Well, if we're ever traveling Texas, I sure hope that someone like Dr. Tyler Butler would have an BnB for rent! He is the nicest human being and it's good that Rebeka had stumbled into his area. Getting close to Zeke is definitely a first step for Rebeka and Tyler's relationship!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Yes, Tyler is a really nice person. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jmdg1954
Great chapter, Barbara.
You've shown Tyler though with her best interests in mind medically, he finally showed that he still is "a guy" and saw her shape and beauty (cleanly$.
I can't wait till they meet the father. That'll be interesting,
Can't wait...
John
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Great chapter, Barbara.
You've shown Tyler though with her best interests in mind medically, he finally showed that he still is "a guy" and saw her shape and beauty (cleanly$.
I can't wait till they meet the father. That'll be interesting,
Can't wait...
John
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Yes, Tyler is a really nice person. Thank you for the kind review. It's about four weeks until Tyler meets Rebeka's dad. Thank you for the kind review.
