Yearning for Warmth.
Wishing warmth from within.9 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great 2-4-6 poem and a great contest entry. It appears your syllable count is correct. It is well organized and flows nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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This is a great 2-4-6 poem and a great contest entry. It appears your syllable count is correct. It is well organized and flows nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Hi Cecilia
Thank you for your warm review.
Bless you and stay safe.
Comment from teafor2
Un-named scribe, although sparse, your message is clearly an SOS signal of longing for an enamoring relationship...Title, picture, theme, and tone
combine to provide an enthralling read. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Un-named scribe, although sparse, your message is clearly an SOS signal of longing for an enamoring relationship...Title, picture, theme, and tone
combine to provide an enthralling read. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem and I appreciate the lovely comments.
Bless you and stay safe.
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You are welcome.
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Bless you
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Smiles:-)
Comment from Stacy M.S.
I really enjoyed your poem. I like the short form, but it still gives us a lovely visual.
I can relate to this poem as it's still bitter cold where I live. I am looking forward to Spring.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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I really enjoyed your poem. I like the short form, but it still gives us a lovely visual.
I can relate to this poem as it's still bitter cold where I live. I am looking forward to Spring.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Hi Stacy
Thank you for reviewing my 2 4 6 double meaning poem and for your lovely comment.
Bless you and stay warm.
Comment from Rylee Holm-Hansen
This was lovely. I think syllable writing is some of the hardest and you did it beautifully. I relate to it in a way considering its pretty darn cold up where I am so I too am wishing warmth from withinðŸ"¥
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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This was lovely. I think syllable writing is some of the hardest and you did it beautifully. I relate to it in a way considering its pretty darn cold up where I am so I too am wishing warmth from withinðŸ"¥
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Hi Ray
Many for reviewing my double meaning poem and for rewarding it with 6 stars.
Bless you and stay warm!
Comment from Michael John Gould
What I got out of this pome was no matter how warm it is inside your house
People always have some type of issue or distress I felt this was a call for help for the individual who was cold inside great poem really enjoyed it God Bless
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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What I got out of this pome was no matter how warm it is inside your house
People always have some type of issue or distress I felt this was a call for help for the individual who was cold inside great poem really enjoyed it God Bless
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Many thanks for your delightful review.
Kind regards.
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Many thanks for your delightful review.
Kind regards.
Comment from royowen
You have successfully written a very cute 2/4/6 poem, with that very good double meaning of touching the outside of the glass to gain an inside feeling, well done, great writing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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You have successfully written a very cute 2/4/6 poem, with that very good double meaning of touching the outside of the glass to gain an inside feeling, well done, great writing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2025
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Many thanks Roy for your lovely review.
Bless you and stay safe.
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Many thanks Roy for your lovely review.
Bless you and stay safe.
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Most welcome
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You too
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Take care.
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Bless you
Comment from tinkervic
Good Job following the rules of the poem. It difficult writing short poems. Very good picture that fits poem well.Thanks for the insight on the deeper meaning. That makes sense.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Good Job following the rules of the poem. It difficult writing short poems. Very good picture that fits poem well.Thanks for the insight on the deeper meaning. That makes sense.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Hi
Thank you so much for your lovely review and awarding my poem with 6 stars.
Bless you and stay safe
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem has such a powerful feeling to it. I really love how you've shared the emotion of longing. And the difference between cold and warmth with just a few words. The "cold hands" and "touching the glass" gives such a feeling of cold. And the last line wraps it all up beautifully.
Great job!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Your poem has such a powerful feeling to it. I really love how you've shared the emotion of longing. And the difference between cold and warmth with just a few words. The "cold hands" and "touching the glass" gives such a feeling of cold. And the last line wraps it all up beautifully.
Great job!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Hi Michael
Many thanks for your thoughtful review of my 2 4 6 poem. I appreciate your lovely comments.
Bless you and stay safe.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think you and many others have the same idea here, we want the spring season to bring a little warmth to our bones, I enjoyed your plea here, the picture looks chilling. Love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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I think you and many others have the same idea here, we want the spring season to bring a little warmth to our bones, I enjoyed your plea here, the picture looks chilling. Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Hi Dolly
Thank you for your encouraging review of my double meaning poem.
Bless you and stay warm!
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