Thoughts of a Man
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Comment from jessizero
I think I would change "slow" to "slowly." Then maybe "quickly" instead of "fast," but that's just a personal thing. It's, of course, your call. I liked your ABC poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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I think I would change "slow" to "slowly." Then maybe "quickly" instead of "fast," but that's just a personal thing. It's, of course, your call. I liked your ABC poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Appreciate your feedback I read it back to myself several times I’m torn between the changes it seems to me they both work I really wanted the pause in the poem I feel the possible changes would make it flow better Still under consideration thank you for assisting me in my work GodBless
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Do you mean: As I (sit) here and wait . . . . in your first line Michael.
When we defend someone we had better be sure they are as honest as you believe, a poignant post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Do you mean: As I (sit) here and wait . . . . in your first line Michael.
When we defend someone we had better be sure they are as honest as you believe, a poignant post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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100 appreciate you God Bless
