Invasion
Under the Blood Moon, Earth Fell4 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
"Commander Raan stood at the center of the command deck. His expression was unreadable as he gazed at the moon's reddish hue on the view screen. She looked up at Raan, eyes flickering with uncertainty."
I got a bit lost here, (his expression) (she looked...) no change of character, A wonderful read, a sci-fi novel in the making, I would definitely read more, maybe a bit long for my normal interest, but very enjoyable, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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"Commander Raan stood at the center of the command deck. His expression was unreadable as he gazed at the moon's reddish hue on the view screen. She looked up at Raan, eyes flickering with uncertainty."
I got a bit lost here, (his expression) (she looked...) no change of character, A wonderful read, a sci-fi novel in the making, I would definitely read more, maybe a bit long for my normal interest, but very enjoyable, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
Comment from Rhonda Hiser
Exactly what I would dread from a Blood Moon. A distraction then an orchestrated attack, reassessment and reattack! Battle scenes are definitive and concise. Precision and tactical support engages the reader all the way to the end. Very well done. Good luck.
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Exactly what I would dread from a Blood Moon. A distraction then an orchestrated attack, reassessment and reattack! Battle scenes are definitive and concise. Precision and tactical support engages the reader all the way to the end. Very well done. Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
Comment from Michael John Gould
That was cool enjoyed the flow of your work I felt like I was watching a movie and being entertained it was something of envy I only write poems I would like to further my work but feel intimidated someday I will find the thought process and courage GodBless
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That was cool enjoyed the flow of your work I felt like I was watching a movie and being entertained it was something of envy I only write poems I would like to further my work but feel intimidated someday I will find the thought process and courage GodBless
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, your story had me hooked from the start! The way you built tension was great. The Blood Moon as the signal for the invasion was perfect. I loved how you showed the Zorath's confidence. The story kept me on edge - especially with the EMP attack. I found myself rooting for Earth despite the overwhelming odds. The ending was terrific. I really enjoyed reading this!
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Wow, your story had me hooked from the start! The way you built tension was great. The Blood Moon as the signal for the invasion was perfect. I loved how you showed the Zorath's confidence. The story kept me on edge - especially with the EMP attack. I found myself rooting for Earth despite the overwhelming odds. The ending was terrific. I really enjoyed reading this!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
