Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
A humorous play on words here and I enjoyed your neat presentation for the contest, it looks like the brown bear here is hiding, I enjoyed the fun here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
Thank you Dolly for this kind review! I always appreciate the feedback! ♡
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is short but so fun! I love the way you played with "bear". That clever twist made me smile. The sense of urgency is great! I can almost feel the panic of the moment. So creative!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
Thank you for your wonderful review! I'm sure I would have other added words to say if ever I encountered a bear. Lol