2025 Favorite Poems
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12 total reviews
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
ah, this most beautiful Haiku chain is so skilfully composed as I take in one sense at a time and verse.
You know me, I'm all about the wonders of nature... and your conclusion had a very positive ringtone... even though I took it as a final destination, it felt so right!
Beautiful-beautiful-beautiful!
Skilful construction, wonderfully composed and as always, the presentation, impeccable. I do appreciate your eye for and to, detail.
With our thoughts we create...
a journey of a lifetime.
Kindest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Hi MariVal,
ah, this most beautiful Haiku chain is so skilfully composed as I take in one sense at a time and verse.
You know me, I'm all about the wonders of nature... and your conclusion had a very positive ringtone... even though I took it as a final destination, it felt so right!
Beautiful-beautiful-beautiful!
Skilful construction, wonderfully composed and as always, the presentation, impeccable. I do appreciate your eye for and to, detail.
With our thoughts we create...
a journey of a lifetime.
Kindest regards,
James.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Hello, James, it's so good to hear from you.thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and kind words 😊
Besitos y abrazos
Marival
"Nature always wears the colors of the spirit," by Ralph Waldo Emerson.
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Comment from jake cosmos aller
great haiku chain about clouds with each stanza illustrating a different aspect of the cloud phenomenon using all the senses to describe nature at its most magnificent
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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great haiku chain about clouds with each stanza illustrating a different aspect of the cloud phenomenon using all the senses to describe nature at its most magnificent
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from tinkervic
Wonderful! Did a great job with following the rules of poem. I like how the words flowed together. The pictures are beautiful. Good job keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Wonderful! Did a great job with following the rules of poem. I like how the words flowed together. The pictures are beautiful. Good job keep up the good work.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this gorgeous poem and presentation with us. You did a wonderful job using all our senses to enjoy it. The words you chose caused me to feel like I was there sitting beside this young lady. I'm not in that long dress. I would end up tripping over it. LOL Your talent shines with this poem.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you for sharing this gorgeous poem and presentation with us. You did a wonderful job using all our senses to enjoy it. The words you chose caused me to feel like I was there sitting beside this young lady. I'm not in that long dress. I would end up tripping over it. LOL Your talent shines with this poem.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I know what you mean, I would probably wear pants.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Harry Craft
Wow! I never heard of this poetry format, but this is a very powerful poem and the rhyming scheme is awesome too! I really enjoyed reading this one. The photo is truly awesome with the poem as well. Keep up the excellent work!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Wow! I never heard of this poetry format, but this is a very powerful poem and the rhyming scheme is awesome too! I really enjoyed reading this one. The photo is truly awesome with the poem as well. Keep up the excellent work!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You are so welcome!
Comment from kahpot
If I had a six, so would you, when the time is right this is a journey, we would like to make, to be reunited with loved ones, and your words make this journey seem so wonderful very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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If I had a six, so would you, when the time is right this is a journey, we would like to make, to be reunited with loved ones, and your words make this journey seem so wonderful very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Thank you, MariVal, for this beautiful celebration of "nature's wondrous gifts," forever going about their ceaseless activity. Love those succulent grapevines. They must take you back to your birthplace:) Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you, MariVal, for this beautiful celebration of "nature's wondrous gifts," forever going about their ceaseless activity. Love those succulent grapevines. They must take you back to your birthplace:) Take care Debbie
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Yes, we have excellent wines.... tempranillo is my favorite 🍷
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem and photo presentation. Good colorful descriptions and imagery. I love, "God's backyard." Good emotion. Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes Love,
Alexan
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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This is an excellent poem and photo presentation. Good colorful descriptions and imagery. I love, "God's backyard." Good emotion. Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes Love,
Alexan
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome!! :)
Comment from teafor2
Gypsy, excellent notes distinguishing Western/English Haiku from Japanese Haiku...Both versions present imagery that captures snippets from nature that hold unique poignancy for instants in time...Some goose-
bumps moments had by this reader:-) teafor2
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Gypsy, excellent notes distinguishing Western/English Haiku from Japanese Haiku...Both versions present imagery that captures snippets from nature that hold unique poignancy for instants in time...Some goose-
bumps moments had by this reader:-) teafor2
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You are welcome. teafor2
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Your Haiku are always so relaxing and the imagery puts me right at the scene. Beautiful presentation as always and I enjoyed
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Your Haiku are always so relaxing and the imagery puts me right at the scene. Beautiful presentation as always and I enjoyed
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
