Thoughts of a Man
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Comment from tinkervic
You did a great job on the poem rules and syllabi's. And when you said always protect your sixth eye that was neat. Always keep an open mind!Best wishes for good writing.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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You did a great job on the poem rules and syllabi's. And when you said always protect your sixth eye that was neat. Always keep an open mind!Best wishes for good writing.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thank you I really enjoy all the feedback it’s giving me confidence to let more people in on my writings
Comment from Arabellesmom
Your writing is amazing I love it so much. Nice to meet you, I'm relatively new here to fan story, and already noticing what a wonderful group with such talent. Beautiful writing
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Your writing is amazing I love it so much. Nice to meet you, I'm relatively new here to fan story, and already noticing what a wonderful group with such talent. Beautiful writing
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thank you Same I’m two days new and have the same reviews for Fanstory and the writers
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so mysterious! I really like "protect your sixth eye" - that line really sticks with me. It feels like a call to be open to deeper truths. Your poem was short but it almost feels almost like a journey. Or a warning. Really thought provoking and well done!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Your poem is so mysterious! I really like "protect your sixth eye" - that line really sticks with me. It feels like a call to be open to deeper truths. Your poem was short but it almost feels almost like a journey. Or a warning. Really thought provoking and well done!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thank you GodBless
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is very thought provoking. I had two older brothers and two older sisters growing up (in nyc) that might fill in some blanks about my perspective but I've taught all kinds of children for 30 yrs now retired. In your poem it reminded me of how brothers watched out for me. Good work!
Peace,
Alex
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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This is very thought provoking. I had two older brothers and two older sisters growing up (in nyc) that might fill in some blanks about my perspective but I've taught all kinds of children for 30 yrs now retired. In your poem it reminded me of how brothers watched out for me. Good work!
Peace,
Alex
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thank you peace and love God Bless
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You're welcome! Peace and love!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have heard of a third eye, but not a sixth one! Keeping our senses alert is a good idea, an unusual tanka and I wish you luck with the contest Michael, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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I have heard of a third eye, but not a sixth one! Keeping our senses alert is a good idea, an unusual tanka and I wish you luck with the contest Michael, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Well new to writing and it was my first tanka. These were my first time posting anything I have written appreciate the kind words. First day on this site but enjoying it tremendously.o
