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Comment from shelley kaye
*shivers*
yea... it's scary out there... and the rich white men don't care, they just sit back and count their money... sigh... *crosses fingers* this doesn't take us into a depressed depression worse than the 30s!
anyway, a great poem - loved the name dahlia!
smooth flow and line connection and deep emotion
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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*shivers*
yea... it's scary out there... and the rich white men don't care, they just sit back and count their money... sigh... *crosses fingers* this doesn't take us into a depressed depression worse than the 30s!
anyway, a great poem - loved the name dahlia!
smooth flow and line connection and deep emotion
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Wendy G
A powerful, meaningful, and timely poem, unfortunately too relevant. Life must be so unsettled for so many of your citizens, and I can feel their anxiety and fear. He's causing worldwide havoc with all his false accusations, about allies as well as his enemies.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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A powerful, meaningful, and timely poem, unfortunately too relevant. Life must be so unsettled for so many of your citizens, and I can feel their anxiety and fear. He's causing worldwide havoc with all his false accusations, about allies as well as his enemies.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Yes, Trump is the worst president in American history. He is bad for our country and for world.
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
So very well said, yes, I am wondering what all the people that voted for this man? are thinking now, as it must be affecting them all, though only news! I here (down under) that the once mighty U.S.A. maybe falling, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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So very well said, yes, I am wondering what all the people that voted for this man? are thinking now, as it must be affecting them all, though only news! I here (down under) that the once mighty U.S.A. maybe falling, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Yes, Trump is the worst president in American history. He is bad for us and for the world. The countries who were our allies are our enemies.
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Great illustration both of the real life situation today and the Goya painting. I agree that the one thing we can do is to appeal to God Who has control over the universe.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Great illustration both of the real life situation today and the Goya painting. I agree that the one thing we can do is to appeal to God Who has control over the universe.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Yes, I pray every night.
Thank you very much, big sister ❤️
Marival
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
So incredibly sad to read this and realize that every word is true and that our country is in a free fall. Thanks for sharing this. Nice written....
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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So incredibly sad to read this and realize that every word is true and that our country is in a free fall. Thanks for sharing this. Nice written....
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
While I was replying to your review, I was thinking of that very thing - "the unavoidable precipice." It feels he is pushing us all ever nearer. Your heartfelt verse resonates with anger and sadness, recounting the story of Dalia's hardship, thus emphasising the plight of the victims of Musk's evil plan. Thank you for sharing your impactful verse. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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While I was replying to your review, I was thinking of that very thing - "the unavoidable precipice." It feels he is pushing us all ever nearer. Your heartfelt verse resonates with anger and sadness, recounting the story of Dalia's hardship, thus emphasising the plight of the victims of Musk's evil plan. Thank you for sharing your impactful verse. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much, Debbie 😊
Gypsy
