The Kidnapping Chapter 3
Lieutenant Brady looks for a two year old boy10 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Another great chapter in the mysterious kidnapping of a two year old child. Now they have lifted some fingerprints, and know who is involved.
Now he has been persuaded to give them names and now know the cartel is involved. This is really good. I can't wait for the next part, Pam. This is so unique, a mystery in a poem story. Great!!! Love and hugs my friend. Sandra xxx
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Another great chapter in the mysterious kidnapping of a two year old child. Now they have lifted some fingerprints, and know who is involved.
Now he has been persuaded to give them names and now know the cartel is involved. This is really good. I can't wait for the next part, Pam. This is so unique, a mystery in a poem story. Great!!! Love and hugs my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
Comment from kahpot
OH! you have a wonderful knack of keeping the reader in suspense, this is great writing, though I suppose a great detective will investigate every clue and avenue, very well written****kahpot
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OH! you have a wonderful knack of keeping the reader in suspense, this is great writing, though I suppose a great detective will investigate every clue and avenue, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I expect solving crimes like this is not an easy task as we can sometimes be fed the wrong information, another fine chapter in your crime series Pam, love Dolly x
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I expect solving crimes like this is not an easy task as we can sometimes be fed the wrong information, another fine chapter in your crime series Pam, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Pam,
I love your style of rhyming poem. It is well organized and flows nicely. I like how you tell a story in it. Hopefully Mr. Brady can solve the case before it's too late.
Well done
Cecilia
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Pam,
I love your style of rhyming poem. It is well organized and flows nicely. I like how you tell a story in it. Hopefully Mr. Brady can solve the case before it's too late.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
When the cartel is involved you know things just escalated to the very worst. Very interesting story so far. Hard to read about things like this happening to small children. Thanks for sharing
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When the cartel is involved you know things just escalated to the very worst. Very interesting story so far. Hard to read about things like this happening to small children. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem had me hooked from the start! The poem is well written with a wonderful rhyme. You kept the tension building in this part of the story. It's like a thrilling crime drama! I love how each stanza added a new twist. That is pulling me deeper into the mystery. This was such a clever story - great job!
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Your poem had me hooked from the start! The poem is well written with a wonderful rhyme. You kept the tension building in this part of the story. It's like a thrilling crime drama! I love how each stanza added a new twist. That is pulling me deeper into the mystery. This was such a clever story - great job!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
Comment from royowen
We've had child kidnapping in the state where I live, a couple of kidnapping were multiple children from one family vanished without a trace, they've never found the children and it's about 50 years since they happened, another beautifully crafted poem Pam, well done, blessings Roy
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We've had child kidnapping in the state where I live, a couple of kidnapping were multiple children from one family vanished without a trace, they've never found the children and it's about 50 years since they happened, another beautifully crafted poem Pam, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Again, thank you for continuing to tell this story. I am enjoying reading this. I find it amazing that you're telling this story in poetic form. You're doing a great job with this.
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Again, thank you for continuing to tell this story. I am enjoying reading this. I find it amazing that you're telling this story in poetic form. You're doing a great job with this.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
Comment from Tim Margetts
Come on Brady. Pull your finger out.
You have a young toddler to find.
Pam, he seems to be one step behind and this case got rather convulted now involving cartels.
Fun times.
Tim x
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Come on Brady. Pull your finger out.
You have a young toddler to find.
Pam, he seems to be one step behind and this case got rather convulted now involving cartels.
Fun times.
Tim x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
Comment from Teri7
Pam, This is a very good chapter you have penned. You used great descriptive words and that image could be Det. Mike Brady. I will try to catch up on the chapters I missed. Love and blessings, Teri
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Pam, This is a very good chapter you have penned. You used great descriptive words and that image could be Det. Mike Brady. I will try to catch up on the chapters I missed. Love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
