Road to the Stanley Cup
10 word story20 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Sweet! I love to hear about young people that have dreams and goals. My daughter was a gymnast and dreamed of being an Olympian. She didn't achieve that goal but she did play volleyball at PennState which wasn't too shabby.
In enjoyed your 10 word poem.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Sweet! I love to hear about young people that have dreams and goals. My daughter was a gymnast and dreamed of being an Olympian. She didn't achieve that goal but she did play volleyball at PennState which wasn't too shabby.
In enjoyed your 10 word poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thank you Janet. Sports have always been a big part of my life and my kids as well. Now our grandkids are enjoying various sports at there different ages.
Thank you so much,
John
Comment from Ulla
Isn't that too sweet. Your ten word poem just says it all. It is a shame it was too late for the contest. It would have had a wonderful chance. All best, Ulla :)))
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Isn't that too sweet. Your ten word poem just says it all. It is a shame it was too late for the contest. It would have had a wonderful chance. All best, Ulla :)))
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Ulla, both Jackson and myself thank you horns warm and soft review.
John
Comment from Begin Again
You gotta start somewhere and have big dreams while you are at it. So many children, especially when they are small, tend to listen to the nay sayers and think they can't do what they wasn't to do. How do you know until you try!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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You gotta start somewhere and have big dreams while you are at it. So many children, especially when they are small, tend to listen to the nay sayers and think they can't do what they wasn't to do. How do you know until you try!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you Carol. Jackson and I appreciate the review.
John
Comment from Boogienights
I hope he makes it ! This is a nice short story about having hopes and dreams. When I was young, I wanted to be a race car driver. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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I hope he makes it ! This is a nice short story about having hopes and dreams. When I was young, I wanted to be a race car driver. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much for the fine review.
John
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how much story you packed into so few words! Jackson's dream is so clear! I can feel the determination behind it. The mention of the Stanley Cup makes it feel full of hope. Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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I love how much story you packed into so few words! Jackson's dream is so clear! I can feel the determination behind it. The mention of the Stanley Cup makes it feel full of hope. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hey there again. Jackson is into jockey, soccer, gymnastics, Legos, legos and more legos
We'll see where this all takes him,
Thank you.
John
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Aw.... Jackson is so darn cute.... and he looks very happy. Great entry for the 10 words about children poetry contest. I know it would had done well.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Â Atticus
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Aw.... Jackson is so darn cute.... and he looks very happy. Great entry for the 10 words about children poetry contest. I know it would had done well.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Â Atticus
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Awe thank you Gypsy. I'll be sure to tell Jackson.
Cheers,
John
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem and supportive photo presentation for the challenge. Good simple description. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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This is an excellent poem and supportive photo presentation for the challenge. Good simple description. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much Alex.
Very much appreciated
John
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Dream big, as Spanky says. (Dream of a big watermelon)
My son, who was always the smallest in his class, but quite athletic, continually asked if he should be a pro baseball player or pro basketball player. (Mugsy Bogues was one of his heroes)
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Dream big, as Spanky says. (Dream of a big watermelon)
My son, who was always the smallest in his class, but quite athletic, continually asked if he should be a pro baseball player or pro basketball player. (Mugsy Bogues was one of his heroes)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thank you Wayne,
I appreciate your stopping by.
John
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi John,
Nice story! It's always good to have a dream, a goal (if you will). We humans need a reason to get out of bed in the morning. We need to pursue something special, even if it's a pretty little red-haired girl, Charlie Brown!
Speaking of the Stanley Cup, how about those Toronto Maple Leafs??? Do they stand a chance this year? Mitch Marner! I knew he'd be a big star the very first time I saw him on the ice. A wonderful playmaker!
I feel sorry for poor old Marchand, though. He wanted to finish his career with the Bruins, but now finds himself in Florida with the Panthers! Imagine him on the ice with Bennett, Tkachuk, and Ekblad during the playoffs this year! Drama!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Hi John,
Nice story! It's always good to have a dream, a goal (if you will). We humans need a reason to get out of bed in the morning. We need to pursue something special, even if it's a pretty little red-haired girl, Charlie Brown!
Speaking of the Stanley Cup, how about those Toronto Maple Leafs??? Do they stand a chance this year? Mitch Marner! I knew he'd be a big star the very first time I saw him on the ice. A wonderful playmaker!
I feel sorry for poor old Marchand, though. He wanted to finish his career with the Bruins, but now finds himself in Florida with the Panthers! Imagine him on the ice with Bennett, Tkachuk, and Ekblad during the playoffs this year! Drama!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Sorry for the late response. Twenty-four hrs in a day is about 4hrs a day to short...
Anyways. I do appreciate your time and review.
Cheers, John
Comment from jessizero
This was a cute piece about a child in ten words. You did a great job capturing the innocent feel, especially when the piece is paired with the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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This was a cute piece about a child in ten words. You did a great job capturing the innocent feel, especially when the piece is paired with the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much Jessi.
