Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Love the "bow to God" ending, all should follow in appreciation of what we were given and what is provided for us, all of nature has its purpose, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy 😊

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Beautiful poem about one of God's amazing creations. Delicate, and yet strong. This so many times in life holds the secret to good balance. Thank you for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025

Thank you

reply by RJ Heritage on 08-Mar-2025

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

cool daisy naani
great imagery of them swaying in the wind, not breaking, but bowing to god... good word choices, smooth flow and line connection

no spag or typos

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊

Gypsy

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I love your poem. The "daisies sway with gusting winds" is so calming pretty. And the way the flowers "bow to God" gives it a spiritual touch that I really enjoyed. It feels like a quiet moment in nature. Like the world slows down for a bit. Wonderful writing!

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025

Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

So beautiful! I love how you say that they "bow to God" even when they are rain-drenched - as they know they grow stronger because of enduring the wind and the rains. Love the picture and I imagine you painting something like that.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025

Thank you very much, big sister. Yes, god and nature go hand in hand 😊

Love,

Marival ❤️

Gypsy