No Man's Land
An adventure on the water.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story is such a fun adventure! I love how you bring the scene to life with all the details. The moment of crossing into "forbidden" territory made me smile. "International outlaws" is the perfect way to wrap it up! Just the right touch of humor. This was such an enjoyable read!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Your story is such a fun adventure! I love how you bring the scene to life with all the details. The moment of crossing into "forbidden" territory made me smile. "International outlaws" is the perfect way to wrap it up! Just the right touch of humor. This was such an enjoyable read!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Thank you! I am glad you liked it!
Comment from RodG
I commend you on how much narrative you crammed into 150 words. I especially like how you set the scene, describing your portage and No Man's Land. It's also easy to visualized those kids collecting contraband. I truly enjoyed this shortie. Rod
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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I commend you on how much narrative you crammed into 150 words. I especially like how you set the scene, describing your portage and No Man's Land. It's also easy to visualized those kids collecting contraband. I truly enjoyed this shortie. Rod
Comment Written 28-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Thank you! I am glad you liked it!
