Comment from TKField

Good

I guess this boils down to the observation that it's dark at night and light during the day, but this simple point is labored and awkwardly stated. "Bleak blurs, blast or bans bold"? What does that mean? The thought process behind this is a bit muddy. It does indeed have a 5-7-5 structure, so I guess mission accomplished.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for review...
sorry you never get anything reading my works...
all your reviews made me sick...
please stop reviewing my works...
know you are great and i salute your wisdom...
please stop reviewing my works henceforth...
please escape my works and save me...
hope you will never review my works in future...

Comment from Starlit Ink

Excellent

I'm so used to poems that describe the dark as ominous and unpleasant, and this poem celebrates it. I love the creativity of the idea of the 5-7-5. I also thing that the alliteration gave it an upbeat tone when reading it.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for commendable review

Comment from Gypsy Starchild

Excellent

This is really good... excellent advice, let your light shine! This reads beautifully...

Now... I like your poetry, but think that you are very rude for hogging the lists like you are doing... you should only repost a couple of your poems at a time... some of do not have credit cards to run up and we work hard to get our poetry listed.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from Keri353

Excellent

Hmmmm, this is the second poem in a row.... both very good. Your reference to "black" means what? I guess it is a bit obscure to me. Thanks so much for sharing this piece. Blessings, Keri

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

reply by Keri353 on 09-Apr-2013

You are welcome

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

"Rule! Glow good, damn black,
Bleak blurs, blasts, blots or bans bold,
Glad! Dark reigns few hours."
i love the alliteration of this particular piece of poetry. very well written.
thank you for sharing!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from amahra

Good

Like the forest green background color and the black and white art image you've provided for your writing. The author notes are confusing.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

Short but powerful. It is well written and carries a strong message. If this is your gift to humanity, then you have given a lot and humanity should be grateful.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for appreciable review

Comment from FLutterodt

Good

Rule! Glow good, damn black,
Bleak blurs, blasts, blots or bans bold,
Glad! Dark reigns few hours.

Another interesting poem. Great imagery and diction.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks

Comment from Rondeno

Good

Doesn't black have its place in the universe? God created it, after all, didn't He? What does "bans bold" mean? Your verse isn't always as clear as it might be.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks

Comment from hari anand

Excellent

Rule! Glow good, damn black,
Bleak blurs, blasts, blots or bans bold,
Glad! Dark reigns few hours.


Wow! Such amazing description of light ruling over dark, great 5-7-5 , with lots of B's. Loved it

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review