2025 Japanese Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Night Falls".
4 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
well, the salmon swim against the current, while tuna swim with the current... maybe birds are like the salmon... lol
very imagistic free flying poem
with smooth flow and line connection
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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well, the salmon swim against the current, while tuna swim with the current... maybe birds are like the salmon... lol
very imagistic free flying poem
with smooth flow and line connection
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 27-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Yeah, I googled it, some birds do fly against the wind. Weird.
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love robins and yet didn't know about their custom of flying against the wind. So this fact enhances your Sijo verse still more in its fine portrayal of a lover returning across the sea. Well done, MariVal. Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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I love robins and yet didn't know about their custom of flying against the wind. So this fact enhances your Sijo verse still more in its fine portrayal of a lover returning across the sea. Well done, MariVal. Debbie
Comment Written 27-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely poem and you capture the feeling of missing someone so well. This one also reminds me of that Catalan shepherdess song as she asks the nightingale to greet her mother. Yours has the robin bring the love song to the narrator.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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A lovely poem and you capture the feeling of missing someone so well. This one also reminds me of that Catalan shepherdess song as she asks the nightingale to greet her mother. Yours has the robin bring the love song to the narrator.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Funny the you thought of that, I wanted a nightingale but it was too many syllables and I don't think he could fly against the wind. Robins can! God's nature is amazing.
I dedicated to you because your family came from Korea 😊
Thank you very much big sister ❤️
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Hooray for robins! I'll have to send you that Rossignol song. I always loved it. 💖
Comment from RJ Heritage
Perhaps flying against the wind gives greater lift. Nicely presented. In my own life, at times flying in the storm brought greater happiness than writing till it called. Thank you for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Perhaps flying against the wind gives greater lift. Nicely presented. In my own life, at times flying in the storm brought greater happiness than writing till it called. Thank you for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 27-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
