2025 Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Robin Hood Wanted".
8 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
Great free verse piece. I love the originality of the structure where you include the "wanted " announcement poster in the middle of the poem. Presentation is gorgeous as always!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Great free verse piece. I love the originality of the structure where you include the "wanted " announcement poster in the middle of the poem. Presentation is gorgeous as always!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much, Mrs Anna.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from kahpot
Exactly, I think this man is going to be the ruin of many and many countries, I knew things were not good, but charging for residency, now that is very odd, a wonderful free verse and thank you for your notes****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Exactly, I think this man is going to be the ruin of many and many countries, I knew things were not good, but charging for residency, now that is very odd, a wonderful free verse and thank you for your notes****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 he is a disgusting man. He will sell anything to make money and gain power.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
He ma y have been against the greedy, the ungenerous, our gifts were given to share, our writing, our artistry, our money, so whoever stole and shared with the poor, it was still stealing, but we applaud the underdog, beautifully written, Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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He ma y have been against the greedy, the ungenerous, our gifts were given to share, our writing, our artistry, our money, so whoever stole and shared with the poor, it was still stealing, but we applaud the underdog, beautifully written, Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Thank you, I think you missed the point.
Comment from shelley kaye
king x and dt jester - LOL!
yes, we need a robin hood... kamala needs to fight - musk has actually said he bought votes... trump has admitted it was rigged... why are they still in?? it's so scary how money talks and the poor drown...
anyway, this was a great poem with a cool twist on the robin hood story
good imagery and smooth flow with well-connected lines...
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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king x and dt jester - LOL!
yes, we need a robin hood... kamala needs to fight - musk has actually said he bought votes... trump has admitted it was rigged... why are they still in?? it's so scary how money talks and the poor drown...
anyway, this was a great poem with a cool twist on the robin hood story
good imagery and smooth flow with well-connected lines...
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 27-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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I heard kamala speech at the NAACP award. It was very inspirational gave me hope. www.google.com/amp/s/www.nbcnews.com/news/amp/rcna193346
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Wendy G
The damage being done is horrific, and as you say the rich are being looked after, but he is not interested in showing compassion to those who are more vulnerable. I do not understand why he was voted back in when he was such a loose cannon the first time around, and made so many grandiose promises about how he would act. It's not a surprise that his agenda is so skewed. A person who always twists truth and has proven himself to be untrustworthy is now leading others down that same path which he declares will make your country great - but the nation will fall, and heavily. I am so sorry. But a fine poem, clear and original. Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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The damage being done is horrific, and as you say the rich are being looked after, but he is not interested in showing compassion to those who are more vulnerable. I do not understand why he was voted back in when he was such a loose cannon the first time around, and made so many grandiose promises about how he would act. It's not a surprise that his agenda is so skewed. A person who always twists truth and has proven himself to be untrustworthy is now leading others down that same path which he declares will make your country great - but the nation will fall, and heavily. I am so sorry. But a fine poem, clear and original. Wendy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Yes, we will probably head to a civil war.... I hope not. I hope good people can complain and put pressure on their congress and senators representatives.
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Your notes show a lot of research and I hope more people will read your work. I don't know how Trump could say what he did about Zelenskyy. West Coast states pay more into federal funds than they get. But the red states that voted Trump in actually put in less and get more. If the cuts take place, it will be those states that will be impacted more. Let's keep praying and writing to our congressmen!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Your notes show a lot of research and I hope more people will read your work. I don't know how Trump could say what he did about Zelenskyy. West Coast states pay more into federal funds than they get. But the red states that voted Trump in actually put in less and get more. If the cuts take place, it will be those states that will be impacted more. Let's keep praying and writing to our congressmen!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much, big sister. I'm praying and doing what i can.😊
Love,
Marival
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine write, Gypsy; I adree it looks hopeless but thevhouse bill has to also be passed by the Senate without changes, and from what I've read, that is not going to happen. All depends on what changes the Senate demands, then it would go back to the House. Hopefully the hue and cry by their own voters will make them see the light
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Another fine write, Gypsy; I adree it looks hopeless but thevhouse bill has to also be passed by the Senate without changes, and from what I've read, that is not going to happen. All depends on what changes the Senate demands, then it would go back to the House. Hopefully the hue and cry by their own voters will make them see the light
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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That's goog news.
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I'm so glad someone on here speaks out the truth of what is actually happening. It has been proven he is working for Putin and no one cares. It's like he has gained control of their minds. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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I'm so glad someone on here speaks out the truth of what is actually happening. It has been proven he is working for Putin and no one cares. It's like he has gained control of their minds. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
