2025 Favorite Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 85 "Your Love"x
13 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
Oh wow! Beautiful and soooo spicy! I love it. My favorite part is the comparison of the love to the moon, doubt and darkness, and light and lovers smile.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Oh wow! Beautiful and soooo spicy! I love it. My favorite part is the comparison of the love to the moon, doubt and darkness, and light and lovers smile.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much, Mrs. Anna.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very cool. I loved the imagery and the overall heated passion throughout. It was a fever that will never die. Beautifully written, Gypsy. Gretchen
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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This was very cool. I loved the imagery and the overall heated passion throughout. It was a fever that will never die. Beautifully written, Gypsy. Gretchen
Comment Written 27-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this sensual poem with us. A poem of love fulfilled. That's always a good thing. I enjoyed reading the poem and the presentation. You did another wonderful job.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Thank you for sharing this sensual poem with us. A poem of love fulfilled. That's always a good thing. I enjoyed reading the poem and the presentation. You did another wonderful job.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Passionate and romantic verses that express the pleasure and fulfillment of lovers. Very sensual and deeply rooted poem that speaks to the desires of men and women, but through the eyes of a male lover.
RJ
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Passionate and romantic verses that express the pleasure and fulfillment of lovers. Very sensual and deeply rooted poem that speaks to the desires of men and women, but through the eyes of a male lover.
RJ
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Harry Craft
A great poem about a great real subject. I enjoyed reading this poem. It is a true subject that we all wish we had in our lives. The painting goes very well with the poem to simplify the meaning too. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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A great poem about a great real subject. I enjoyed reading this poem. It is a true subject that we all wish we had in our lives. The painting goes very well with the poem to simplify the meaning too. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy 😊
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You are so welcome!
Comment from royowen
I can remember my girlfriend when I was a mere boy of eighteen, the nights were clear and cool, we took a couple of blankets to the grassy places at the local sports field, I loved that girl, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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I can remember my girlfriend when I was a mere boy of eighteen, the nights were clear and cool, we took a couple of blankets to the grassy places at the local sports field, I loved that girl, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Thank you
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Welcome
Comment from teafor2
Gypsy, this amorous title, enticing picture, universal theme and sensual
tone is completely absorbed in your smooth flowing consummating of the
natural acts between lovers. I enjoyed my take away. teafor2
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Gypsy, this amorous title, enticing picture, universal theme and sensual
tone is completely absorbed in your smooth flowing consummating of the
natural acts between lovers. I enjoyed my take away. teafor2
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You are welcome, Gypsy. teafor2
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and a unique way of describing wholesome young people having a picnic. Excuse me for a second."
"YES? What? You're shitting me!"
"Apparently, just been told this isn't about a picnic. Well, in that case, since it's about a subject
I no longer can relate to, I'd just bettrr say "good" and politely back away!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2025
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and a unique way of describing wholesome young people having a picnic. Excuse me for a second."
"YES? What? You're shitting me!"
"Apparently, just been told this isn't about a picnic. Well, in that case, since it's about a subject
I no longer can relate to, I'd just bettrr say "good" and politely back away!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2025
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LoL Thank you very much, I appreciate your humor and review 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
This shows a lot of passion between lovers. I like your light and dark references with the moonlight variances. The natural metaphors like that of peaches mouth and references of the riverbed make it well suited to the shepherd's lifestyle.
when the moon wains, (wanes?)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2025
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This shows a lot of passion between lovers. I like your light and dark references with the moonlight variances. The natural metaphors like that of peaches mouth and references of the riverbed make it well suited to the shepherd's lifestyle.
when the moon wains, (wanes?)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 big sister. I fixed it.
Love,
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh this was a very imagistic romantic grey erotic poem
smooth flow and cool word choices with good line connection
simple yet powerful emotions
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2025
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ooh this was a very imagistic romantic grey erotic poem
smooth flow and cool word choices with good line connection
simple yet powerful emotions
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2025
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I appreciate your kind words and review 😊
Gypsy
