On A Planet Far Away
Democracy at risk on other planets.5 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It would be very interesting to find a planet with other humans on it and perhaps learn how they have managed a globe similar to our own. I enjoyed your inventive story Harry, it is a very interesting concept, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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It would be very interesting to find a planet with other humans on it and perhaps learn how they have managed a globe similar to our own. I enjoyed your inventive story Harry, it is a very interesting concept, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the encouraging review. So pleased you enjoyed the story. xxx
Comment from royowen
There are some people who were born mean, and no matter what anyone can do they simply remain thst way, probably by their own decision. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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There are some people who were born mean, and no matter what anyone can do they simply remain thst way, probably by their own decision. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I think there may be a genetic disposition toward meanness, however, one has free will to do what is right or kind.
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I agree
Comment from Julie G1
This story portrays an excellent interpretation of that theme about power corrupts. Too true. The allegories are conveyed with an excellent talent for writing in an apt response to the challenges of a word tally. Great story..
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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This story portrays an excellent interpretation of that theme about power corrupts. Too true. The allegories are conveyed with an excellent talent for writing in an apt response to the challenges of a word tally. Great story..
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Appreciated.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Flash Fiction Contest. I pray that those vines of justice pull him down to hell but I fear they have been pruned back so far they will never be able to reach him. but we keep on fighting til the end. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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An excellent entry for the Flash Fiction Contest. I pray that those vines of justice pull him down to hell but I fear they have been pruned back so far they will never be able to reach him. but we keep on fighting til the end. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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I have edited the story to make it more fictional. I hope you still like it.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Yay again! I reread this and honestly, I read it more as you meant for it to be, now. It does sound more fictional now. Pardon me as I am watching news 24 7 lately. I did enjoy your story just as much this way, and a good message still runs through this. Excellent work and presentation!
Alex
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Yay again! I reread this and honestly, I read it more as you meant for it to be, now. It does sound more fictional now. Pardon me as I am watching news 24 7 lately. I did enjoy your story just as much this way, and a good message still runs through this. Excellent work and presentation!
Alex
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2025
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Thanks for the read and your comments. I have edited the story to make it more fictional. I hope you still like it.
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I'm sure I will. and I will enjoy rereading it to see. :) Alex
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Also, forgive me, I confused your name with Harry T. We has been discussing something earlier. I'm very sorry for the confusion. Alex :)
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You still have Harry T. Anyway you are forgiven, at least, by me. Harry T
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ha ha In my only defense I have memory issues from MS now. :( I meant Harry Croft. Of course, because T and C are so similar. :/ Ugh. I must laugh at myself, Harry. ;)
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I have memory issues also, but from old age. Sorry about the MS. So pleased you are on this site.
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I've fought MS for 30 years since i was 26. It used to blind me on and off but it also gave me a challenge i overcane like a suoerhero in my mind. I earned my masters, taifht, etc but it wasnt easy. Now, this is manageble as i can still see and walk, I just forget what day or month it is and such things you may know too. Going blind in one eye led me to talk my child and leVe violence at 26 so I feel it saved my life. I think i can turm any negative into a positive perspective. It's been my plan. ;)Somehow i made it through to a good husband and good house and no new MS attacks. Thank you for the Empathy and kindness, my friend! There's a reason I mixed up the Harry's, I see. I met you. Another positive.
Have a good day,
Alex :)
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Thank you for sharing your courageous story. So happy for you now that you have a good life.
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Thank you, too. :)
