Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

Well done, the imagery though obtuse strikes a chord. Follows all the strictures to a tee. We are as humans, animals too, like ants, birds(Prey and predator) we fight for room, for food..a natural world encompasses us all and we have to survive within it...takes work.

Regards:

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

This is indeed a very short one. Lovely general layout. Dot on syllable count. I liked how you involved you reader in this one by the question you asked.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi,creeator...I Am not sure I understand the meaning of this one. I'm sure it is not your concern however...It Is definitely good poetically. Bob (Mastery)

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello my friend this is well written we have to work to be able to eat in this world no one should be hungry but unfortunately this isn't true well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from seewhatimwritingnow

Excellent

So true. Each creature must work to be fed, even the tiny ant. Great 5-7-5 creation! Did you mean to say 'Rhyme is intentional?' Just wondering, as there is no rhyme? (natural, toil and all do not rhyme) Still a great statement. Thanks for sharing. Betty

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Life is what we make of it. The Good, The Bad and The Uguly.
This is what life is all about. We get up in the morning, trying to get through the day. Good job.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

reply by c_lucas on 18-Apr-2013

You'welcome

Comment from mauial

Excellent

This captures Biblical teachings. I think the apostle Paul it was who said, "let him who doesn't work, not eat." Also the Proverbs tell the lazy one to look at the ant and see his ways to learn how to work.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from GratefullyRecovering

Excellent

Awesome job :) I'm out of 6 stars :( but great job really, I like how it all swims together and goes together wonderfully.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

An interesting Read! Thank you for the background on this poem. The poem was thought provoking and different. The reader enjoyed the read and thought about it a lot. The artwork was perfect and enhanced the read.
Thank you, harmony13

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from poetic1988

Excellent

this is a nice poem
I like the flow & the rhyming you have
also this poem feels like there is more to it than meets the eye
I have a feeling to me this poem is more about being hungry spirtually as oppose to physically that's my take but if I'm wrong I do apologise

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for excellent review