Oh Life!
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Hungry?"Experiences of living
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Comment from Galactia
LOL yep so true, work to give our governments money and work the lands and hopefully reep the rewards, mabe a few ripe fresh fruits to enjoy in life:)
Great job
regards
Tia
That's all we are drones, or ants as you gave it, yet now we aren't working for our queen we working for the bank owners who own the world.
Great job
Regards
tia
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LOL yep so true, work to give our governments money and work the lands and hopefully reep the rewards, mabe a few ripe fresh fruits to enjoy in life:)
Great job
regards
Tia
That's all we are drones, or ants as you gave it, yet now we aren't working for our queen we working for the bank owners who own the world.
Great job
Regards
tia
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, alcreator, you did an excellent job writing this short poem about the way we are all required to work in order to eat. i enjoyed reading it
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this is very well written, alcreator, you did an excellent job writing this short poem about the way we are all required to work in order to eat. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from jaeladarling
Not feeling the hunger yet, but I'm sure I will in the morning. Nothing like a plate of good food to get going. Enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Not feeling the hunger yet, but I'm sure I will in the morning. Nothing like a plate of good food to get going. Enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from Sanku
Again a very good message .if you are hungry ,you must eat .to eat you must work hard and ants,birds and other animals do that .your idea of learning from nature is excellent .
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Again a very good message .if you are hungry ,you must eat .to eat you must work hard and ants,birds and other animals do that .your idea of learning from nature is excellent .
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Oh dear, I seem to be reading all your work out of order. Another 5-7-5, perfect of form with a clear and concise message. Work to survive and avoid
hunger. Sort of the old learn to fish instead of being given a fish. Author Notes: yes I do. Another enjoyable read. I like your writes and find they prompt considerable thought. Smiles. Robin :)
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Oh dear, I seem to be reading all your work out of order. Another 5-7-5, perfect of form with a clear and concise message. Work to survive and avoid
hunger. Sort of the old learn to fish instead of being given a fish. Author Notes: yes I do. Another enjoyable read. I like your writes and find they prompt considerable thought. Smiles. Robin :)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
Comment from prayingpoet
You do have some interesting poems, and articles but I must say I don't always "get" what it is you are trying to say. This one however, was fairly easy to "get."
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You do have some interesting poems, and articles but I must say I don't always "get" what it is you are trying to say. This one however, was fairly easy to "get."
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
Comment from Gloria ....
OK Al, now I'm startin' to get a little confused about what you're up to here. You've got seven poems on the front page and I expect in another couple hours that will up to nine. I know you've got a bankroll the size of Donald Trump's Tower but what gives?
Gloria
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OK Al, now I'm startin' to get a little confused about what you're up to here. You've got seven poems on the front page and I expect in another couple hours that will up to nine. I know you've got a bankroll the size of Donald Trump's Tower but what gives?
Gloria
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
Comment from Glasstruth
Your background notes are as interesting as the poem itself. As in one poem I wrote said, "Only the strong surive." Like the short one sentence words. Moves the poem along at lightning speed. Great job! Les
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Your background notes are as interesting as the poem itself. As in one poem I wrote said, "Only the strong surive." Like the short one sentence words. Moves the poem along at lightning speed. Great job! Les
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
Comment from fairy77
This is a great 5-7-5 and looks fabulous. I enjoyed toil and ants and all. Very good but I thinks its a haiku. Maybe Im wrong. Just an idea. beth fairy77.
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This is a great 5-7-5 and looks fabulous. I enjoyed toil and ants and all. Very good but I thinks its a haiku. Maybe Im wrong. Just an idea. beth fairy77.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
Comment from ravenblack
like the universality of this piece, hunger and work lumping man together w/ birds and ants and all - one vibrant web of hunger
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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like the universality of this piece, hunger and work lumping man together w/ birds and ants and all - one vibrant web of hunger
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for good review
