Comment from Badger_29

Excellent

I r e m a i n in awe and amazed @ your ability to break down complex equations into simple statements. Thank you so much for sharing these words of wisdom with (us).

Blessings,

Brother � Cull

Darren

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2021

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Hungers and interesting subject to write about.
What percentage?
How many deaths from it?
Where is the worst place that it's happening?
Why is it so bad there?
These are questions that need to be asked and addressed properly.
There's no reason for the state I live in New Jersey that's 60,000 people go to bed every night hungry.
Good write Al.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky1024'

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

The author is a spiritual person evidently from reference to a thought in inspired scripture, namely Proverbs 6:6-8, "Go to the ant, you lazy one; Observe it's ways and become wise. Although it has no commander, officer, or ruler, it prepares its food in the summer, and it gathers its food supplies in the harvest..." The Greatest Author in the Universe inspired these words.
The author of this piece aspires to success as a writer by following greatness. Best wishes

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Nice twist to bring man directly into the created order with animals and bypass the often made distinction between man and nature. Good poems. Enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

So true, something that is the law of nature....All, included.. food grown it takes some work for man & like your poem reads that, too, smaller creatures, birds & ants & all have to still toil for their food ...I really like this poem!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

Work, or as you say toiling, teaches us many things. It is meant to be that we should work to eat. It is natural just as is hunger and the generations that try to skip it do so at their peril.Your haiku says much Giddy

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from TKField

Good

Hi-coo; thingy
Malingering birds/insects etc.
Workday, jerk-play yay yay
But some other time, okay
To survive, strive to stay alive
Details at eleven, don't be late
For work and play, say can't be beat
And what's this got to do with
Finding something else to eat?

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for review... sorry you never get anything reading my works... all your reviews made me sick... please stop reviewing my works... know you are great and i salute your wisdom... please stop reviewing my works henceforth... please escape my works and save me... hope you will never review my works in future...

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your well-written 5-7-5 effectively states a fact of life--one that God made clear from the beginning: Man and creature must work to survive.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from trailblazer101

Excellent

Yes, I am. Work like a dog to get something to eat.

Short and sweet and a life truth as you advertise. Even us ants.


For survival, you must toil,
Work; birds, ants and all.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from LoveLifeKnight

Excellent

hmmmm interesting.....i guess its good to put things in a natural, animal perspective every once in a while. salad is a healthy choice of illustration......

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review