Eyes Green
A poem describing a woman's beautiful mask and beneath2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is beautifully written. I love how you show the outward beauty and intelligence of the girl. And the inner struggle she hides - there's such depth in those "cold, shaky fingers." The rhythm makes it flow so easily. And the ending hits hard. This is a truly moving piece!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
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Your poem is beautifully written. I love how you show the outward beauty and intelligence of the girl. And the inner struggle she hides - there's such depth in those "cold, shaky fingers." The rhythm makes it flow so easily. And the ending hits hard. This is a truly moving piece!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for reading and your feedback!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I thought at first this was a quietly confident and self assured girl, but the table turned and she was far from confident, but self critical. An unusual, and rather passionate post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
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I thought at first this was a quietly confident and self assured girl, but the table turned and she was far from confident, but self critical. An unusual, and rather passionate post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 21-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
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Thank you, Dolly! I tried to capture what many women feel they have to be in this world.
