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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Deep End of the Sea".
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Comment from kahpot
A beautiful poem about a woman, your descriptions of a woman and the desires she needs and grows in others are wonderful, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
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A beautiful poem about a woman, your descriptions of a woman and the desires she needs and grows in others are wonderful, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. This is an amazing woman you've written about. I enjoyed reading this entry and wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. This is an amazing woman you've written about. I enjoyed reading this entry and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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Thank you 😊
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from lyenochka
I love your quote ""Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart." So true and as we lose our physical attractiveness, our inner beauty still glows!
You captured a man's love for a woman's beauty well.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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I love your quote ""Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart." So true and as we lose our physical attractiveness, our inner beauty still glows!
You captured a man's love for a woman's beauty well.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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Thank you 😊 Big Sister
Love,
marival
MariVal
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is an utterly beautiful celebration of a woman. I particularly like the last stanza and "Your belly is a promise of life.." and the female association with the sea with its birth of womanhood. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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This is an utterly beautiful celebration of a woman. I particularly like the last stanza and "Your belly is a promise of life.." and the female association with the sea with its birth of womanhood. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 19-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 Debbie
Gypsy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is beautifully written. I love how you compare the body to nature like the smoothness of sand dunes. There's almost a reverence in your words. It felt so tender. Absolutely lovely!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Your poem is beautifully written. I love how you compare the body to nature like the smoothness of sand dunes. There's almost a reverence in your words. It felt so tender. Absolutely lovely!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 Michael
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
What a wonderful love song you've composed and imaginatively created, to utter and write simple, repetitive words in a way that titilate tha soul is truly a gift, well done, great job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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What a wonderful love song you've composed and imaginatively created, to utter and write simple, repetitive words in a way that titilate tha soul is truly a gift, well done, great job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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Good job
