Comment from mariejames

Excellent

A very touching poem, and an enjoyable read. You might consider changing the spacing between stanzas for easier reading. There are no errors that I can find, and no suggestions for improvement. I like it just as it is. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review
sorry for the late

Comment from Marni62

Excellent

I really liked this poem as it made me think about creation, and why on earth I'm here. Your poem made me look at myself and determine my purpose on this earth and to make the most of it while I'm here. thanks for making me think. good job.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for fantastic review
sorry for the late

Comment from Rhymiin

Good

I loved the quotes, but the flow lost me a few times. Perhaps it's because I'm not familiar with this style. I will read this piece again. I enjoyed reading all of the quotes but something about the form confused me. Have a blessed day

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks
sorry for the late

Comment from DEEPTI GUPTA

Excellent

Highly thoughtful and philosophical poem !
Great thinking, great emotions, great feelings - I salute the poet
and his beautiful creation - this poem.
Keep it up . Warm wishes !
Deepti

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review
sorry for the late

Comment from janeis200

Excellent

this had something of a religious chant to it reminesent of Hail Mary.
As a result it flows well and their is clear continuity to your message.
Great poem and well worth 5 stars. Jane

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review
sorry for the late

Comment from Beatlegirl61

Excellent

Mankind...what could be a nicer dedication! I totally enjoy all the philosophical meanings in this wonderful series and thank you for sharing such brilliant thoughts and messages! Very well written piece here!
Live life and be well...Carol: ::)

'Beatle' quote today: "All things must pass..." (George Harrison)

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for fantastic review
sorry for the late

Comment from Premiere Vision

Exceptional

Hi AW,
I agree whole heartedly with you, all your wordings on this one seem reticent of the idea of creation. What you have worded in these lines is witness to the increasing despair of humanity, there are no answers and only more questions.
Prem

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

THANKS FOR THE REVIEW WITH A STARRY SIX STAR RATING IMMEDIATELY ON PROMOTION. YOUR WRITING STYLE SPEAKS YOU ARE AN INDIAN, THE LAST LINE GIVES ME THE IMPRESSION, I MAYBE WRONG.

THANKS FOR SUCH AN HONEST RATING WITH A GLOWING VOICE OF APPRECIATION I DO APPRECIATE IT MUCH.

I AM NOT SURE HOW YOU CAME TO KNOW ABOUT THIS PROMOTION WHEN IT WAS NOT LISTED, PLEASE LET ME KNOW THE SECRET.

WITH GOOD WISHES.

reply by Premiere Vision on 19-Aug-2006

Hi AW,
I am Indian, yet with a voice many people feel is universal, as in my fs-bio, I do explore ideologies and do not cater to any religious platforms, simply because I think that they needn't have a need for existing in the first place.
Your poem is fantastically true, and I have absolute belief in what you wrote.
Although it may not have been posted, it appeared briefly as a new poem, and I accidentally stumbled upon it, because I review only poems, I will try and see whichever poem, and on the website of fs you can lock onto odds promoting poems when they have been posted fresh. Early bird catches the worm so to speak.
So, no secrets, it may not pay me to review- I still find it an amazing piece of writing. Which is the reason, I may scour the site, to read anything that I feel is good or even excellent or higher.
Please feel free to discuss anything that comes to your mind, for I seek like minded individuals like yourself for spiritual betterment of this World/ On a very personal level, which may mean I touch a few lives of these, who are my most loved friends and family.
Ragards,
Prem

Comment from drivenbackward

Excellent

You definitely have a unique approach. I followed this most of the way. The end confused me a little, but I still got your overall message, which was worthwhile and powerful.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

THANKS A LOT, YOU MAY RE-READ THE LAST STANZA IF YOU SO LIKE, I DO HOPE YOU'LL FEEL SATISFIED NOW.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Exceptional

Hi ALCREATOR, Now this will make people of this earth think about God's creation, start to care of (our earth) God gave it to us to take care of, which we are slowly destroying. Wake up mankind, TAKE CARE OF YOUR EARTH.
What an amazing write, very strong words.
Gert

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

THANKS A LOT FOR THIS AWESOME REVIEW AND GLOWING RATING I DO APPRECIATE IT MUCH.

YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY MORE GLOWING WITH THE GRACE OF GOD.

THANKS FOR RIGHT JUDGEMENT IN A MINUTE OF PROMOTION.

IF YOU NEVER MIND, I WISH TO KNOW YOUR SECRET OF KNOWING ABOUT THIS PROMOTION WHEN IT WAS NOT ENLISTED AND WHEN YOU ARE NOT MY FAN EITHER.

THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN FOR PATRONIZING THE TRUTHS IN A BOLD VOICE INDEED.

WITH BEST WISHES.

reply by Gert sherwood on 19-Aug-2006

Hi , to answer your question--IF YOU NEVER MIND, I WISH TO KNOW YOUR SECRET OF KNOWING ABOUT THIS PROMOTION WHEN IT WAS NOT ENLISTED AND WHEN YOU ARE NOT MY FAN EITHER.
I was seaching the site to review folks writings. I found this. Again I believe it is amazing.

I want to ask you a question--I tryed to send you a private message, I found that I was quelched ( By you). Did You intend to quelch me. If so Why??
gert sherwood

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2006

Thanks. Sorry to know that you have been squelched. I have never squelched you. Why should I do that devilish work? You are mistaken.

I am not the culprit. Please check, detect, discover and find out the truth. Let me know what actually happened. Awaiting for your reply. Let an innocent be saved from such a condemnable allegation.

With best wishes.