Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

A nice poem that reads easy and flows nicely. A deep poem that ask some difficult questions. A path that we all will walk. We are born and will do some day. Then what?

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This describes creation well. Each single line is an aspect and the tercet following it a definition all leading us to the knowledge we are here to do a certain job to make our lives and others more faithful and livable.

In tercet 6 got should be get and used should be use so all verbs are in the same tense.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good professional review

reply by dragonpoet on 18-Apr-2013

You're welcome. I try my best.

dp

Comment from neharika.m

Excellent

hi, the poem is a forceful declaration of supremacy of the Creator. We , in our daily pursuitsand ignorance, arrogate to ourselves the excellence, whereas it is His benevolence. The language, the vocab, the alliteration is awesome. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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thanks for professional review

Comment from Norbanus

Exceptional

A flash of fire across the bow!
Mankind will soon be learning how
the WRITER views their luney ways
and of the bill everyone pays.

Nicely turned, my friend.

Norbanus

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for the poetic review with highest rating
sorry for the late

Comment from Donaya Haymond

Exceptional

I find something deeply profound, with a mixture of grief and joy, in your poetry. What I have read of this book seems like a work that can change lives - if you could get our deaf and blind fellow humans to listen.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2006

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thanks for review with highest rating
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Comment from Authoroni

Exceptional

ALCREATOR WRITER: Just read your "Oh Life! Chapter 15: Losing!" and felt the intensity of your comittment to words and their options for use. I am impressed!

Good job, well done!

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review with highest rating
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Comment from mslink1

Excellent

A.W. I have read much of your works since I joined FS. This ranks at the top as a well told, story only in poem form.
Mankind would do well to remember, these are indeed God's creations, on loan to humanity.
I could say much more but will end by simply saying, this poem touched by spirit by speaking words of wisdom and truth...Mary.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2006

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thanks for nice review
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Comment from aparna_a

Good

you did it well. clear in your writing it looks as if you could do justice to the subject. i should say you expressed well your thoughts.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks
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Comment from azulazul

Excellent

Truth be said,

It can never steer you wrong. Your poem flows smooth. Images project well
Order of words makes the statement even more powerful. Your poem comes to full circle. You have created much emotion. As for the artwork it is acompliment to your poem.
Cheers, Azulazul

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2006

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thanks for nice review
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Comment from pbearse

Excellent

From top to bottom this is written with grace and style and given my penchant for anything N.A. (including much of my own work) I am guessing very much written from that point of view. You are right of course that the best way to serve Him is through the protection of His earth and all that is on it. My turn to wish I had 6

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for fantastic review
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