Comment from Caressa_08

Exceptional

Believe this poem to be a true work of art, really truly, understand this poem, than most that are out there...As, it makes a lot of sense.....Am so glad, that, finally, you are able to show to us your talent, yet once, again.


Blessings, your way...

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for excellent review with highest rating

Comment from October21

Excellent

Creation is SO well-explored in this brilliant poem which has excellent flow. There are many things wrong with the world and with mankind but you have picked out all the amazing things:D

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for correct review

Comment from Nebukadneser

Excellent

you are truly a great poet, my friend.
I love this fresh approach to the way you write.
The repetitive line - His order of creation is, but yet you change it every time to describe the absolute perfectness of His creation is brilliantly done.
Well done
You rock, my man
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for excellent professional review

Comment from God's Writer

Excellent

A wonderful poem my friend. So full of wonderful word pictures. You kept my interest throughout this awesome poem.
Thank you

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from smudge

Excellent

An interesting poem. It is almost like a hymn using repetition to good effect. The background may be less distracting in authors notes. The red presentation would be better black and a picture from FanArt may be nice.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for professional review

Comment from kiwisteveh

Good

Sorry, but once again I find this too difficult to get into. You state that it is dedicated to9 Mankind but this is mostly about Him - the capital suggests God.
It is possible to serve God by helping mankind - is that what you mean? Impossible to say.

Steve

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks

Comment from Gypsy Starchild

Excellent

Wow. This poem is very thought-provoking and it reads beautifully. I would not change a single thing. I did have to read it three times for it to fully sink in, but I liked more each time I read it.


Your status, stand, show, style, pomp, pride,
Glory, grace, power, portfolio or possession,
Like roses, all leave, you too; someone's to enjoy.


This is my favorite part! Thank you for sharing this beautiful masterpiece!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review

Comment from Perp Ihebom

Excellent

This is a nice piece of writing with some very good and memorable lines. I find your sentence structures awkward. Better constructions would bring out the profundity of your words. kudos

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

With this one extraction I think I can sum up the entirety of this poem that reiterates the theme which seems to be... Do what is expected of you. You are no more or less than the simplest life form, made to perform a function and die.

"Your status, stand, show, style, pomp, pride,
Glory, grace, power, portfolio or possession,
Like roses, all leave, you too; someone's to enjoy. "

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

The enjoyed reading this. I just finished reading about how we must learn to serve others as Jesus washed the feet of the disciples. Good message.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for the review