Oh Life!
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Comment from Janetsue
Through the Bible, God's Holy Word, we are given guidelines for a life that honors Him. This covers all areas, the physical world outside of us, and the inner world where our thoughts, emotions, and choices are birthed. You have posted a very interesting poem that challenges readers to dig deep into who they are and how their lives are being lived.
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Through the Bible, God's Holy Word, we are given guidelines for a life that honors Him. This covers all areas, the physical world outside of us, and the inner world where our thoughts, emotions, and choices are birthed. You have posted a very interesting poem that challenges readers to dig deep into who they are and how their lives are being lived.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
I could not agree more, well it is Sunday after all!
Gracious His Achievement to Creation is!
Giving and serving mankind, no losing it is!
Gain, gain and gain, all mortally, all truly, and gain all it is!
Serve mankind, as feasible, or possible to serve Him, as it is!
Clear His Creation Causal as is!
Take care Pete
Perfect His Order of Creation is!
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I could not agree more, well it is Sunday after all!
Gracious His Achievement to Creation is!
Giving and serving mankind, no losing it is!
Gain, gain and gain, all mortally, all truly, and gain all it is!
Serve mankind, as feasible, or possible to serve Him, as it is!
Clear His Creation Causal as is!
Take care Pete
Perfect His Order of Creation is!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
We all live only once. And it is our bounded duty to God to live the right way. Helping each other to the larger good of humanity. The purpose of life is to live happily. Life is a beautiful journey that is meant to be embraced to the fullest every day. Thanks for sharing a very thought-provoking poem.
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We all live only once. And it is our bounded duty to God to live the right way. Helping each other to the larger good of humanity. The purpose of life is to live happily. Life is a beautiful journey that is meant to be embraced to the fullest every day. Thanks for sharing a very thought-provoking poem.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your interesting and unique poetry. It's beautifully written. I can understand it. Nice job. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your interesting and unique poetry. It's beautifully written. I can understand it. Nice job. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Startling phrases and alliteration: Your status, stand, show, style, pomp, pride, glory, grace, power, portfolio or possession. I'm with you on minimal punctuation!
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Startling phrases and alliteration: Your status, stand, show, style, pomp, pride, glory, grace, power, portfolio or possession. I'm with you on minimal punctuation!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from Eunice Amero
Yes He is a wonderful marvelous God. He gives and we enjoy. Sometimes even taking advantage of His goodness. Life comes and than death and we have to make sure we are ready to meet Him. Good poem
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Yes He is a wonderful marvelous God. He gives and we enjoy. Sometimes even taking advantage of His goodness. Life comes and than death and we have to make sure we are ready to meet Him. Good poem
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from Pj Dennison
This is a poem that required a slow read with times to stop altogether and ponder but then there times when the meter speeds up when there repeated words or alliteration amongst words and it sounds really cool in my mind like a word dance. Contemporary dance that it. It would be interesting to hear this manuscript spoken aloud with emphasis and various vocal nuances. For me, the poem seemed to be a teaching of sorts. I hope I didn't oversimplify your poem by the notes I wrote below. These are just a few of the things I received from your poem. Undoubtedly I imagine people will see different things and that is meant to be. Also, I read your poem backward first then forewords. I think it helped me to see the sections by their headings better. My eyesight is a little impaired. Thank you for sharing your poem.
What I Heard:
Serve God and serve others (In serving you gain
Dedicate your living to the cause of mankind (You cannot hide from God)
We are tested in life to discern our roles
Your real home is with God but you have a purpose and a mission while here
Its never too late to give the gift God has given you to mankind
Don't be anxious and worry, work, live by God's rules, don't worry about where things will come from putting God first because he will take care of you. Consider the lilies of the field Matthew 6:25-34
All that you have, your gifts, talents have been given to you by God they were infused into not innate.
God has created us to change and to die purposely by his design.
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This is a poem that required a slow read with times to stop altogether and ponder but then there times when the meter speeds up when there repeated words or alliteration amongst words and it sounds really cool in my mind like a word dance. Contemporary dance that it. It would be interesting to hear this manuscript spoken aloud with emphasis and various vocal nuances. For me, the poem seemed to be a teaching of sorts. I hope I didn't oversimplify your poem by the notes I wrote below. These are just a few of the things I received from your poem. Undoubtedly I imagine people will see different things and that is meant to be. Also, I read your poem backward first then forewords. I think it helped me to see the sections by their headings better. My eyesight is a little impaired. Thank you for sharing your poem.
What I Heard:
Serve God and serve others (In serving you gain
Dedicate your living to the cause of mankind (You cannot hide from God)
We are tested in life to discern our roles
Your real home is with God but you have a purpose and a mission while here
Its never too late to give the gift God has given you to mankind
Don't be anxious and worry, work, live by God's rules, don't worry about where things will come from putting God first because he will take care of you. Consider the lilies of the field Matthew 6:25-34
All that you have, your gifts, talents have been given to you by God they were infused into not innate.
God has created us to change and to die purposely by his design.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
I think most of us will leave their mark on the face of the Earth, it's simply a matter of living your life as one should, the only thing that won't be be remembered is our name. Well done, great post, blessings Roy
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I think most of us will leave their mark on the face of the Earth, it's simply a matter of living your life as one should, the only thing that won't be be remembered is our name. Well done, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from Ulla
I will admit that I have difficulty making head or tail of this. With the best of my intention I just can't give you more than four stars. I still don't know what its all about. Ull:)))
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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I will admit that I have difficulty making head or tail of this. With the best of my intention I just can't give you more than four stars. I still don't know what its all about. Ull:)))
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you, thank you, and thank you for making an honest try to read my work ?Losing? and writing this expressing your justification for rating my work with a four star.
I do not plead my work and I know it is an offence so I cannot say everything is right or correct there.
I have read all the reviews you have sent to me for my works. I have to write truly and honestly my feeling about your writing, I find, you are very and very weak in English and reading or appreciating a poem anyway. All that is 100% of your writing (in the name or form of writing a review) give me a feeling English is not your mother tongue. Because always you find all (100% of my works) have been so hard that you could not even catch, make out, understand or appreciate the essence, theme, concept of any of my works. While 99.99% of other reviewers never pointed out about anything like what you have pointed out. I do appreciate that you have honestly expressed your feeling as I have honestly and truly expressed about your writing here. I maybe wrong, so please excuse me.
It is good, I dare not suggest, advice or recommend you anything for I know how wise and great author, writer and litterateur you are!
I know none is perfect and none can truly or really say, write, speak, express, declare, suggest, advice, recommend or communicate the last word on anything.
I know and believe that everyone keeps his own art, style or mode of expression and only wise receives a better suggestion or advice.
As you have expressed somewhere you do not believe in religion or God, that is your own, original or personal knowledge, view, understanding, belief, wisdom and viewpoint about life or living a life. None on earth can object about your wisdom.
Like you, I also write my feeling and truth. So, I have expressed it. Please never misunderstand me. I do not like to hurt you. I only mentioned the truth as you have ever expressed.
I appreciate your decision of rating my work.
Wishing you every success in your chosen goal,
With the kindest personal regards,
You are really a wise, acknowledged and accomplished writer,
Sincerely yours,
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
13/06/2021
Morning, Sunday
Post Cyclone Josh Day
Rainy and cloudy day
Vigourless day
Waterlogged living day
Sick in bed day
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That was quite a mouthful. Thanks for that :)
Comment from Begin Again
God created us as equal and gives us the chance to become what he desires for us... but regardless of how far we climb... we all leave this life and enter our future life on the same level again...none of this goes with us. Smiles, CArol
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God created us as equal and gives us the chance to become what he desires for us... but regardless of how far we climb... we all leave this life and enter our future life on the same level again...none of this goes with us. Smiles, CArol
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
