Oh Life!
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Comment from Badger_29
You certainly are thorough with your author's notes right down to the source of the picture which isn't plagiarism rather borrowing something that's profound and appropriate.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
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You certainly are thorough with your author's notes right down to the source of the picture which isn't plagiarism rather borrowing something that's profound and appropriate.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
Comment from elchupakabra
Your voice as a writer is definitely unique; the religious pieces wane my interest but it's true to your nature as a writer and I suspect as a person. Good work technically on this free verse, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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Your voice as a writer is definitely unique; the religious pieces wane my interest but it's true to your nature as a writer and I suspect as a person. Good work technically on this free verse, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
Comment from Susan Larson
While we may not like to think about dying, we are on the road to death the moment we are born. Your poem is long and complex, but well worth reading. You said a lot in this one.
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While we may not like to think about dying, we are on the road to death the moment we are born. Your poem is long and complex, but well worth reading. You said a lot in this one.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Losing!
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Nice free verse about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
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Losing!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice free verse about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Your writing varies so - a good sign of a good writer. I enjoyed this, but had to read it three times to absorb your messages. Your writing is that complex. Excellent work here!
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Your writing varies so - a good sign of a good writer. I enjoyed this, but had to read it three times to absorb your messages. Your writing is that complex. Excellent work here!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
Comment from CP!
This is a very good chapter in the book. I like how the headings are clear and how the work written underneath them are short and sweet. You did a great job!
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This is a very good chapter in the book. I like how the headings are clear and how the work written underneath them are short and sweet. You did a great job!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
Comment from amada
This is a deep, and at the same time very sensitive piece of writing...quiet Sunday, raining outside, and your lines indicate melancholy, the death of another day, my own death, someday, maybe soon, at the end of a day like thins...Touching, your lines.
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This is a deep, and at the same time very sensitive piece of writing...quiet Sunday, raining outside, and your lines indicate melancholy, the death of another day, my own death, someday, maybe soon, at the end of a day like thins...Touching, your lines.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This profoundly meaningful piece descriptively tells the absolute truth about life and death. We are here for a very short time; death is inevitable. So--we should spend the time we're blessed with trying to make the world a better place.
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This profoundly meaningful piece descriptively tells the absolute truth about life and death. We are here for a very short time; death is inevitable. So--we should spend the time we're blessed with trying to make the world a better place.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
Comment from Boogienights
I don't like to think about dying, but your poem makes me stop and think about how insignificant possessions are in the scheme of things. We come into the world with nothing...we'll leave the same way. Thanks for sharing. :)
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I don't like to think about dying, but your poem makes me stop and think about how insignificant possessions are in the scheme of things. We come into the world with nothing...we'll leave the same way. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
Comment from amahra
The Father created the world and placed His most prized creation to rule with given instructions. Your writing reflects these rules for living upon this great planet. Great job.
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The Father created the world and placed His most prized creation to rule with given instructions. Your writing reflects these rules for living upon this great planet. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
