2025 Japanese Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "* Winter Sun *".
6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The photograph you chose is beautiful. I enjoyed just staring at it before I read the poem. As far as I'm concerned, your poem is perfect. Thank you for sharing both with us.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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The photograph you chose is beautiful. I enjoyed just staring at it before I read the poem. As far as I'm concerned, your poem is perfect. Thank you for sharing both with us.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
translucent rays of light - love this line - just not sure why lol
great imagery with smooth flow and line connection
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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translucent rays of light - love this line - just not sure why lol
great imagery with smooth flow and line connection
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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I was trying to create the light reflected on the snow... translucent
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy......this poem is a nut-shriveller just reading it. With unchecked climate change thanks to The Republicant's, there's only two seasons, freezing and char-broiled.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Another fine poem, Gypsy......this poem is a nut-shriveller just reading it. With unchecked climate change thanks to The Republicant's, there's only two seasons, freezing and char-broiled.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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I know, how cam they not see it. Even snow in Florida!
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful poem that is well illustrated by an equally beautiful picture
I can just imagine the light as it shines through the ice, with colors of flowers caught in crystal.
RJ
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Beautiful poem that is well illustrated by an equally beautiful picture
I can just imagine the light as it shines through the ice, with colors of flowers caught in crystal.
RJ
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you 😊
Gypsy Blue 🌹 🥀 🏵
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This poem presentation is strong. The image represents your words very well. This is also thought provoking. As am artist, I can see the petals following the sun's rays to the ground. Beautiful.
Best wishes,
Alexan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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This poem presentation is strong. The image represents your words very well. This is also thought provoking. As am artist, I can see the petals following the sun's rays to the ground. Beautiful.
Best wishes,
Alexan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you 😊
Gypsy Blue 🌹 🥀 🏵
Comment from BethShelby
This Japanese poetry form is beautifully written with you classic way of illustrating it. I love it. I just learned you might have to leave your home due to the fires. I hope and pray the winds will die and the fires will be under control. Stay safe and know we all are hoping you and your home will be fine.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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This Japanese poetry form is beautifully written with you classic way of illustrating it. I love it. I just learned you might have to leave your home due to the fires. I hope and pray the winds will die and the fires will be under control. Stay safe and know we all are hoping you and your home will be fine.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Beth. The fires are close but contained. We are okay and have a plan if we are evacuated.
Thank you 😊
Gypsy Blue 🌹 🥀 🏵
