Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Chapter 30 Wiling Hearts"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
27 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Great job on your chapter, Barbara.
I'm so far behind on reviewing, I had to go to your profile page to find it, lol. I don't want to miss the next one, either.
I look forward to reading your new book!
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Great job on your chapter, Barbara.
I'm so far behind on reviewing, I had to go to your profile page to find it, lol. I don't want to miss the next one, either.
I look forward to reading your new book!
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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The final chapter will be posted Sunday. Then next Sunday, I start a new novel. I appreciate you searching this one out. Thank you. You and your husband remain in my prayers.
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Thank you for your prayers. It's still a one day at a time sort of existence. He's getting better bit by bit, though, which is great!!
Big hugs,
Rhonda
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The way Noah and Sami act with each other is very sweet. I like how hard Noah is trying to fit in Sami's life.
I hope they get married soon. :)
Gypsy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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The way Noah and Sami act with each other is very sweet. I like how hard Noah is trying to fit in Sami's life.
I hope they get married soon. :)
Gypsy
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Sami's dad never died. He's been an important part of this story and has been seen at least 4 times. At the hospital when her mom broke her hip, at the Father's Day celebration, they went to his work site where asked his permission to marry Sami, and now in church and at Sunday Dinner. I'm not sure where you got the idea he died. Oh well, it happens. Thank you for the kind review. Only one post left.
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I'm sorry, I have a horrible memory
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I do understand. It happens to me often.
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I changed the review
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you didn't need to. You're too sweet.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Some good dialogue in this one. Seems I have come in almost at the end but happy to read good writing at any time. Take care and have a most wonderful day. Thanks for sharing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Some good dialogue in this one. Seems I have come in almost at the end but happy to read good writing at any time. Take care and have a most wonderful day. Thanks for sharing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Yeah, well, so the story is coming to an end. I'm sure Greg and Sami will find a happy medium when it comes to work. He is certainly doing his best. The family also likes him and that's a great bonus. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Yeah, well, so the story is coming to an end. I'm sure Greg and Sami will find a happy medium when it comes to work. He is certainly doing his best. The family also likes him and that's a great bonus. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Sami and Noah will be settling in. Thank you for the kind review.
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Sami and Noah will be settling in. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
Oh! i loved this scene .It was so heartwarming ,all the family attending the church and then going out for lunch. They warmly welcomed Noah who made a mark with the little boy.. And the announcement of a baby due.
I love to read happy family scenes , something slowly vanishing from our lives..
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Oh! i loved this scene .It was so heartwarming ,all the family attending the church and then going out for lunch. They warmly welcomed Noah who made a mark with the little boy.. And the announcement of a baby due.
I love to read happy family scenes , something slowly vanishing from our lives..
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and the support.
Comment from forestport12
Once again I like the way you apply dialogue without tags and then at times put just enough information to keep us in the know of whose who. It seemed pretty realistic about Noah and church and thoughts of crowds, seating, etc....I'm always liking to see how you write from a Christian world view and keep it lively, engaging, and not cheesy. Always learning from you.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Once again I like the way you apply dialogue without tags and then at times put just enough information to keep us in the know of whose who. It seemed pretty realistic about Noah and church and thoughts of crowds, seating, etc....I'm always liking to see how you write from a Christian world view and keep it lively, engaging, and not cheesy. Always learning from you.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the understanding and the support.
Comment from GWHARGIS
A very good chapter here. Anytime you have to integrate into a large and very open family, there will be nerves and gitters and you displayed Noah's reaction very realistically. I enjoyed this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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A very good chapter here. Anytime you have to integrate into a large and very open family, there will be nerves and gitters and you displayed Noah's reaction very realistically. I enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement and the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Having Noah take the child out to play was a good choice as it lets us know that he would like children, as Sami is absolutely a mother type. I did find a few things to fix: . . .got (to be) too much. . . . . . outside (,) as Sami . . . . . . Sami's eyes and (she) said. . .
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Having Noah take the child out to play was a good choice as it lets us know that he would like children, as Sami is absolutely a mother type. I did find a few things to fix: . . .got (to be) too much. . . . . . outside (,) as Sami . . . . . . Sami's eyes and (she) said. . .
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the catches. I will check them out. I appreciate the help and kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
All the pieces are coming together and it looks like you're about to tie things up in a neat package. I'm always a sucker for happy ending and a believer of happily ever after, as rare as it is. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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All the pieces are coming together and it looks like you're about to tie things up in a neat package. I'm always a sucker for happy ending and a believer of happily ever after, as rare as it is. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement and the kind review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Somebody needs to start a listing of men like Noah that are actually available...lol! ;) A wonderful fairytale here, my lady -- it's good to know that smooth sailing is still one the romantic fiction list!! ;) Well done! Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Somebody needs to start a listing of men like Noah that are actually available...lol! ;) A wonderful fairytale here, my lady -- it's good to know that smooth sailing is still one the romantic fiction list!! ;) Well done! Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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I do understand. Men like Noah are difficult to find. Thank you for the kind review.
