Close Your Eyes
Acrostic5 total reviews
Comment from Tina Crute
Aw, this is lovely and comforting, too! Sailing through the night has such an adventurous but calm attraction to it. It almost reads like a lullaby.
Good job:)
Tina
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Aw, this is lovely and comforting, too! Sailing through the night has such an adventurous but calm attraction to it. It almost reads like a lullaby.
Good job:)
Tina
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from Brandon Tarvin
Very good poem! I love how you stick with the rhyme scheme, it makes it easy to read and keep the flow going. Keep up the good work and happy writing
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Very good poem! I love how you stick with the rhyme scheme, it makes it easy to read and keep the flow going. Keep up the good work and happy writing
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a well written acrostic poem. It rhymes well and readers will relate to this topic. I enjoyed reviewing your poem and photo presentation. There is coloful imagery throughout. Best wishes to you, Alex
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This is a well written acrostic poem. It rhymes well and readers will relate to this topic. I enjoyed reviewing your poem and photo presentation. There is coloful imagery throughout. Best wishes to you, Alex
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed how relaxing your poem feels. It's like a gentle lullaby. Your poem has a dreamy tone that made me want to close my eyes! The flow from one line to the next is smooth. I loved how you wrapped it all up with the transition into morning. Your poem is a lovely escape into a dreamy world! Keep up the great work!
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I really enjoyed how relaxing your poem feels. It's like a gentle lullaby. Your poem has a dreamy tone that made me want to close my eyes! The flow from one line to the next is smooth. I loved how you wrapped it all up with the transition into morning. Your poem is a lovely escape into a dreamy world! Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Lana Marie
OK, I need to read this right now. As I'm laying in bed very tired from a long day. I saw the title "close your eyes" I thought that's a great idea so this is my last review for the evening. Good job and sweet dreams. I like your picture and the words you chose toput this together.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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OK, I need to read this right now. As I'm laying in bed very tired from a long day. I saw the title "close your eyes" I thought that's a great idea so this is my last review for the evening. Good job and sweet dreams. I like your picture and the words you chose toput this together.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thanks for your review. Now,do as the title says.. Goodnight
Geoff
