Prayers and Thoughts for Gypsy
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Mermaid Wishes"Her sister has passed away
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Comment from judiverse
Yes, memories of good times create pictures of happiness. It is comforting to have them when we lose a loved one. I like that you chose a mermaid to think of Gypsy in her time of sorrow. It's interesting to think of a mermaid communicating with a human. Lovely presentation, and one that will bring comfort. judi
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Yes, memories of good times create pictures of happiness. It is comforting to have them when we lose a loved one. I like that you chose a mermaid to think of Gypsy in her time of sorrow. It's interesting to think of a mermaid communicating with a human. Lovely presentation, and one that will bring comfort. judi
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Elaine, this is so lovely and it is perfect and I am sure will mean a lot to Gypsy.
I love how you relate her loss to the mermaids and the ocean. Your analogy of how it all ties in with the loss of her sister and how they will be together again someday. I love the last line and that you add that perhaps her sister is watching over her. Beautiful! Thank you for sharing this lovely sentiment for Gypsy.
Love, Debi
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Elaine, this is so lovely and it is perfect and I am sure will mean a lot to Gypsy.
I love how you relate her loss to the mermaids and the ocean. Your analogy of how it all ties in with the loss of her sister and how they will be together again someday. I love the last line and that you add that perhaps her sister is watching over her. Beautiful! Thank you for sharing this lovely sentiment for Gypsy.
Love, Debi
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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I am honored by your words. Thank you for your heartfelt thoughts. Elaine
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Thank you very much for contributing to Debi book of prayers. I appreciate it. The poem and presentation.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for contributing to Debi book of prayers. I appreciate it. The poem and presentation.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you. Elaine
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your poem! It is so peaceful and calming. Like the mermaid drifting through warm salty waters. I love how you express the connection between the mermaid and her sister. I felt a deep bond. This is such a beautiful poem - great job!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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I really enjoyed your poem! It is so peaceful and calming. Like the mermaid drifting through warm salty waters. I love how you express the connection between the mermaid and her sister. I felt a deep bond. This is such a beautiful poem - great job!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Love your words. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Sugarray77
This verse is lovely and I know that Gypsy will adore the refernces to the sea and to your self, sweet Mermaids. She will also like the colorful art and background you chose. You know she always uses gorgeous artwork just as you have. Well done!
Melisa
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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This verse is lovely and I know that Gypsy will adore the refernces to the sea and to your self, sweet Mermaids. She will also like the colorful art and background you chose. You know she always uses gorgeous artwork just as you have. Well done!
Melisa
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you. I feel so bad for her. It is hard to lose a sibling. Elaine
